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War of the Damned Chapter 3: The Departure

Posted by sinfulwolf - March 19th, 2010


And yet another chapter arrives. The plot is unfolding much slower than in Blood, but I don't think that's a bad thing. I'm having more fun writing this, as I've been able to expand my scope much more and can include some more interesting characters and events. Hope you enjoy.
Picture from Medieval_Vampire121 from deviantart. Great artist.

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Chapter 3: Departure

Robert Donaldson walked up the hill towards Gwenhwyfar's hall, holding the reins of her beastly horse in one hand. Even Katelyn who had a suspiciously close relationship with the vampire seemed afraid of the creature and walked with Robert between her and the horse. The beast snorted, tugging on the reins slightly as it saw the hall up ahead, and its red eyes seemed to glow with anticipation. The horse had been stabled in the village even before Robert himself was born, and was fed the raw flesh of slaughtered sheep twice a day, rather than the hay kept for the other horses. It was completely unnatural. Rumours said it was centuries old, and every time he saw the thing, Robert could not bring himself to even doubt those words.

A shudder ran up Robert's spine as the black furred monster pulled, even as he struggled to hold it firm. On the horizon, the sky glared in brilliant reds and purples as the sun hid from the oncoming night. Stars were already starting to twinkle in the sky, and Robert had to force his fear down. He never liked the night, always did his business by day; night was for criminals and demons. He was neither.

His father was the village elder, and David would have come up the hill himself if it weren't the fever that had been plaguing him the past week. Whispers were already spreading through the village that within the month, Robert would take his father's place in formality, as he already had in practicality.

The horse snorted again, and looking over, Robert could see a smile spreading across Katelyn's features. They were close to the hall now, and Gwenhwyfar awaited them, dressed in black breeches, and a light brown tunic, in the open doors with arms crossed over her chest, sword sheathed at her hip. Saddle bags, already full lay on the ground by her feet. Robert swallowed, he had never liked dealing with the vampire.

"Adara," Gwenhwyfar called out cheerfully.

The horse pushed ahead, the reins slipping from Robert's hands, though he was happy to be free of the creature. He watched as nearly white hands ran over black fur, and quiet whispers passed from rider to horse. Katelyn ran ahead, almost jumping on Gwenhwyfar, but hanging away because of Adara.

"What if the Vikings attack again?" Robert demanded of the woman who had defended these shores for as long as anyone in the village could remember.

"You will be on your own whilst I'm gone. Set out watches on the coast, request soldiers from Kirkwall," Gwenhwyfar told him, as she lifted a saddle and threw it over the horse's back, earning another nostril born snort.

Robert ran a hand through his thinning gray hair and looked down the hill towards his home. A few torches were lit, beckoning back to his home, where his children slept soundly, and his wife awaited his return. As he looked back towards the vampire, she had finished securing the saddle in place and was tying down the saddlebags, strapping a Welsh longbow and a quiver of arrows to the soft leather. She tugged on them, and nodded when she was satisfied, before turning her gaze back to Robert.

"I expect nothing to happen to Katelyn in my absence. It would be regrettable for you all if her choices should bring unwanted attention her way," Gwenhwyfar informed him.

"I cannot be accountable for the actions of others," he said, knowing full well the mistrust the others held of the woman. Besides the scars left by a monster adorning her neck, there were also the rumours of the unholy affair the two had.

"Oh but you are Robert Donaldson. This is your village, and the lives of everyone within are your responsibility. Even should you deem Katelyn's life not worth while to defend, think of my vengeance when I return. I will ensure blood flows in rivers, while you watch," Gwenhwyfar snarled, stepping forward so her lover could not see her lips pull back, showing off her fangs.

Robert blanched, and dumbly nodded as an answer.

"Then your business here in concluded. Go home to your family," Gwenhwyfar said, and the elder's son did as he was told at a run. Gwenhwyfar and Katelyn watched him go, before turning to each other, whilst Adara let out a whinny of impatience.

"Take me with you. Please," Katelyn pleaded, wrapping her arms around the undead woman, comforted as the embrace was returned.

"I would not put you through that danger. Even if you do not think it now, my road is much more dangerous than awaiting here," Gwenhwyfar said, and bent her head to kiss Katelyn's lips.

Cool fingers ran through chestnut brown hair, and warm hands moved down the muscles of Gwenhwyfar's back. Lips touching, eyes closed, both women enjoyed the intimacy of the moment. Gwenhwyfar broke the moment, and stepped out of Katelyn's arms before moving to Adara, setting one foot in a stirrup.

"I love you," Katelyn said as the vampire hoisted herself into the saddle.

Gwenhwyfar sighed, and cast the woman a sad look. The look alone brought tears to Katelyn's eyes, and her lips trembled as she braced for the words she knew were coming.

"It was lust Katelyn, nothing more," Gwenhwyfar said, before pressing her feet into Adara's flanks. Mount and rider took off at a gallop to the south.

Katelyn was left behind, watching the woman disappearing into the distance as tears began to run down her cheeks.

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"Let him go heathen," the half drunken soldier demanded, a sword pointed towards Elishka and the choking man she had hostage. The tip wavered as he struggled to retain focus.

"I've told you fool. I am Christian," Elishka said calmly, despite the rope she held that dug into the man's neck, cutting off his breathing. His fingers desperately attempted to free himself. She was very much regretting her decision to remove her mask in this inn. All she had wanted was some wine for the road.

"But ye got the look of a Muslim about you," the first soldier said, taking a step forward.

"John has got himself beaten by a woman," a third guard said with a loud laugh, sword tip digging into the boards of the inn. He thrust his hips forward suggestively, and Elishka rolled her eyes.

"Very well then," Elishka said, and let go of the rope.

The man took a deep gasp of air, but hands quickly grasped the top of his head and his chin. With widening eyes he knew there was nothing he could do to stop his own doom. Elishka snapped his neck, and let the body flop to the floor. The other two soldiers looked down, dumbfounded, unable to completely grasp what just happened as their vision swam.

Elishka pulled out the dagger beneath her cloak in the small of her back, and stepped onto a table and leapt from the wooden platform. The third soldier looked up in time to be tackled to the ground, steel piercing the flesh of his throat. He tried to scream, but could only let out a choked gurgle as blood ran from his mouth and pumped out of the wound in his neck.

Elishka quickly licked her lips, before she snapped her head forward and sank her fangs deep into the wound. Blood washed over her tongue and splashed down her throat and she revelled in the flavour as she felt the guard bleed out beneath her.

"Bitch," the first guard yelled, and Elishka felt a sword plunge through her stomach.

She gasped in intense pain, before a foot to the back send her collapsing to the ground, blade pulling free from her flesh. Quickly rolling to her feet, dark blood staining her clothes, skin and muscle began to quickly knit itself back together before the drunken soldier's astonished eyes.

"Demon! Get back!" he yelled, starting to back away from the creature before him, his comrade's blood running over her lips and down her chin. The other patrons who had only been watching, now screamed in fear. Some ran for the door, fleeing into the night.

Elishka shook her head sadly, and picked up the dead soldiers sword.

"You had your chance to walk away and live. You've sealed your fate," she said, almost without emotion.

The soldier stumbled over a chair, falling to the ground. Elishka pounced, jumping into the air, and pointing the tip of the sword towards the man's chest. Blade punched through chainmail armour and cleaved the man's heart and lung. Elishka pulled the sword free with a spurt of crimson. Blood bubbled from under his armour as the man struggled to breath in his last precious seconds of life.

Elishka watched as the soul left his eyes, before scanning the inn. The only one who remained was the inn keeper, who leaned against the far wall, face pale, eyes wide.

"I do apologize for the mess. I had only intended to drink some wine, but after all this violence I'm in need of something with more... substance," she said, pulling back her lips to reveal blood stained fangs.

The innkeeper screamed as he turned to run, but Elishka hopped over the counter and grasped him before he could make it to the back door. Swinging the heavy set man around, the vampire courier smashed the man's fat face against the counter top. He was almost sobbing now as he spat out blood and broken teeth. Elishka held him against the counter and ran her tongue over his neck.

"Do not be troubled. This will hurt," she said, before tearing viciously into his flesh and drinking deep.

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Stepping out of the roadside tavern, Elishka looked either way down the road. In the distance she could see the lights of Dublin gleaming in the night, where her next contact waited. Bringing her dagger to her mouth, she licked the English soldier's blood from the steel.

"I really hate English," she said to the night, before going to the small stable beside the inn to retrieve her horse.

Next Chapter

War of the Damned Chapter 3: The Departure


Comments

That is very good indeed, it looks i'm reading a book. You have excellent skill on making stories like this, please continue with your work.

I shall indeed. I'm pleased you've enjoyed what I have in so far.

Your skills in the way of storytelling are amazing as usual. Truly epic.

Why thank ye.

Gad, I'm sorry it took me forever to get back to you...

I do agree. I've got a feeling that this will stretch out further than Blood. Not that I mind. Any excuse to read literature as good as this, I'll take it.

"You had your chance to walk away and live. You've sealed your fate,".
>:)
Sometimes, simpler is better.

That was a good fight sequence. A little quick though. I understand she's just fighting drunken stupid soldiers (*cough* cannon *cough* fodder *cough cough*) who probably were let in the service more for their reckless bravery than their swordsmanship skills in the first place, which wasn't unusual then. But when the competition's that easy, it tends to go at a pace that can make reader's have to double back. I didn't but it came close. Fights are good. Fights involving two characters with names? Better than good. I'm not trying to rush you into making one right away. When it comes, it will come naturally like it should. But I'm just reminding you that for each of these mini skirmishes you have is that much more you have to make the big battle BIGGER. I can hardly wait.

The picture is good. But I like others better.

You're still doing good and I still await the next one.

"BEHOLD!!! All the sky, earth, water and even fire converge together to seal your miserable fates! Prepare for a tragedy unlike any hell you've ever witnessed, other worldly or otherwise! PREPARE FOR ABSOLUTE ANNIHILATION!!!!"

-DarkX.

PS: That speech was something I came up with a while back. I'll put it to good use yet.

I'm happy you're more than willing to read the full thing as it unfolds.

As for the small skirmishes against nameless enemies. It can be difficult to write them out, especially if its a battle against nameless enemies on a larger scale. However, many times in combat the soldiers on either side did not know whom their enemies were. That was war. Later on there will be characters fighting other characters rather than simple cannon fodder. I do hope it will come out well, and some of the sword fights I have planned will hopefully be longer than Haley's short battle against John.

I just thought the picture fit the mood of the initial scene, which is why I used it.

I wonder where you'll use that speech... perhaps in Guardian?

I don't know that that particular line will be in Guardian. When I conceived that line (I'M A FATHER!!! I'll get back to you in nine months!), I imagined a more fantasy setting as opposed to sci-fi. But you never know. Life as we know it is subject to change. Just as my intents are.

In retrospect, I see the reasoning in your picture choice. It really makes me wonder though. Gwenhyfar claimed her relationship with Katelyn was lust. Yet she can't disregard the company she gave her when no one else would. It really makes me curious about Gwen and leaves lots of questions. Too many to bother you with. I must admit, you have succeeded in piquing my curiosity with this interesting character. While fights are something to look forward to, I can't wait for you to delve deeper into her character as well.

Speaking of battles, I'm eager at the promise of better battles than Blood. I don't know how you'll top Haley versus John and stay within your constraints, but I'm sure you'll pull it off.

I'm still enjoying Elishka's line. Not gonna lie, I totally find her desirable. Not just cause she be female, not just cause she's a vampire but also she kicks so much ass. It's a sad thing that she's such a fantasy character. I have yet to find a girl like that.

Crazy curls crave crippled corny curvy chicks choosing chores and chains,

DarkX.

Stories and plots change all the time. War and Blood have both changed so very much. More so War, I change its outcome with each page I put down. New journeys, characters, battles etc. It's always changing, and I look forward to seeing how Guardian turns out.

I love Gwenhwyfar. She is by far my favorite character in this story. Her past is relatively known, but I will be putting a small spin on it to make it fit this story better. She will of course be explained more and more in the coming chapters. As to her relationship with Katelyn, she did truly enjoy the time she spent with her. Human contact afterall, but she could see that it was not love she felt for the woman. Lust can take on multiple forms, rather than simply sexual. The fact that you are looking forward to characterization as much as gore tells me that I'm succeeding in creating a truly worthy tale, rather than a simple thinned plot action story.

The third Crusade is still being waged in the east, making room for some large battles, but there will be more, and perhaps not in the desert, I can not reveal that just yet. There will be many small skirmishes and raids before any large battles occur. Some that I'm actually looking forward to writing.

Elishka I designed when I wrote that "Secrets under Sun" story, and she ended up replacing another character I had in mind. That other character was much more of a filler, and I rather like Elishka. I have however met girls that kick as much ass as she does. In how she behaves, she's not entirely fantastical.

I can see why she would be. I'm growing to like Gwenhwyfar too.

And I only made that "fantasy," remark about Elishka because I have met no girl like that AT ALL. I know they exist somewhere! Just not where I am... :(

Since you brought up Guardian, I'll have you know that the introductory post is almost done. I'm putting a lot into it, including the March artist monthly post. Yeah, February and January went AWOL. >_< But I plan to make up for lost time. And, hopefully, I'll get it up today.

Just so you know, I like talking to you a lot. So much so, I'm considering getting a MSN. Fair warning though, it's not the foremost item on my agenda.

The crusades...
I read about them, know about them...
If it's really your intent to bring that into the story, things are gonna get reeeeeeealll messy. Unfortunately, I don't remember what the Third Crusade was fought for.

Until time says "NEXT,"

-DarkX

Looking forward to reading your post when you get it up finally.

However, I've already started to implement the Crusade. Lord du Lac's raid on the Saracen encampment in the desert. Part of the Crusades my friend. The Third Crusade was chiefly led by Richard the Lionheart of England to regain control of Jerusalem from Saladin. This is a backdrop mostly for the story, though Richard may indeed show up as a character. He was one of my more favorite medieval persons. So how do you mean things will get real messy with the Crusades brought in?

your story is getting better nao.just work a little harder.

Thank you... any tips or points to improve?

i cant read all that on account of my small brain

So I see...

I think you made a typo in the first chapter. When describing Katelyn you said she was in her "mind twenties"?

That would be a typo. Thank you for pointing it out, I'll go fix it.

Newgrounds froze for me for several days, I'm pretty pissed.
It wouldn't let me open up private messages or my profile or anything.

Do you plan to work on a series?

It froze for another few hours.
How long do you plan this to be?

You don't have a planned ending?

When inspiration strikes?

Tough job being an author.

So it's like a hobby?

What made you decide to start writing?

Oh? You fought in Afghanistan?

What did you work as?

Any injuries/serious injuries?

So armor can stop bullets now? :P

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