Nice pic to go with the story. You're a damn good writer!
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Thank you very much, and I've been trying to find good pictures to go along with the various chapters.
amazing simply amazing i love it and cant wait for part three
Wow... thank you very much. I hope to have part 3 done soon.
Once again, very nice.
Thank ye. More should come soon.
lol, I'm not a reader at all, but I liked your work here. The pic is awesome as well. :3
Thank you very very much. A non-reader taking the time to read my stuff is the ultimate compliment. I'm also glad you liked the picture. I thought it worked well with this chapter.
Good to see you back from your Canadain military duty if I remember correctly. Long time since newspost 61. I didn't know you were back until I saw your comment in kittykillsalot's newspost. Interesting zombie story, you wrote. I'm usually not the survival stories type, I'm more adventurer. I'm still intrigued. The tale is starting picking up on it's exciting parts.
I know what's happening Haley is now a vampire because of the pale lady stranger in your first part. Joey and a young woman are searching for escape. I wouldn't mind you explaining some things in the next chapter but I suggest you would put some suspense in finding some facts by the characters. It's your story and I'm only putting a suggestion.
Suitable picture for your story even though they're not fighting mobs of inflected yet.
Thank you for the welcome back, and thank you for the comment. I'm glad you're liking something that generally isn't your style.
As for revealing facts... the next chapter I just decided to get some chronological issues out of the way.
Seriously, Thats some good shit. In most zombie movies soldiers get there asses kicked... i hate that you have the balance right. i hope to read more ;) i salute you lol
I myself am I soldier so I tend to... favour them more I suppose you could say. Regardless, I'm just trying to make a good story, and I'm glad you are enjoying in so far.
Im hoping to join the army Myself, Next year :D should be fun
It's... an interesting experience. But well worth it.
A nice follow-up to the previous story.Very descriptive,and I thought that you accurately depicted a virus,ravaged city (what with all the self-reliance and selfishness).Definitely helped me visualize the scene.
Found a few errors,but fewer than last time.
Later in story,I hope you explain some things about what's happening,or what caused this to happen.I know you couldn't explain it now (what with all the frenzied zombie hordes invading,and what not),but later,I hope you answer some of these questions I have.How did this zombie infection get created?How was it released?What's Joe's background?How did he hear about the rumor that military were going to be at the harbor?Who's Haley?What's her relation to the story?I couldn't possibly ask you to answer all of these in one episode,but I hope you get around to it.And I also hope you'll continue this series :)
I do plan on continuing the story, and I do hope to answer all yer questions. Though maybe not all. A little bit of mystery is good.
However, I'm glad you've enjoyed it thus far.
:D :D
Best of luck to you in yer adventure!
zombies + guns + more zombies + exelent way of words = awsomeness
nice work!
Don't be forgetting vampires :P
But thank you. I'll be sure to let you know when chapter 3 is up.
Sorry, but I'm not feeling it, "misinformed my post" ignorant. After you started to sound worse than Alex Jones, I lost taste of this story as a result of you not thinking why nor you looked it up on the internet, so do some research, fuck wad, you pissed me off calling me an anarchist like if you were FUCKING ALEX JONES, he got censored for too much nonsense, which is what you DID, saying too much thoughtless nonsense so I'm gonna censore you too for being thoughtless of my post, so keep your thoughtlessness to yourself and get the FUCK OFF MY PROFILE, because destruction was like first thing that came into your mind.
I'd uh, rather keep this conversation where it belongs rather than on my profile, where I have a story rather than a debate. If you want to debate, keep it there and we can yell at each other as much as we feel like. However, please don't spread it elsewhere. I do not think its necessary here.
However, censorship seems somewhat against your views, and its generally not good for society. Did you not read Fahrenheit 451? Please not respond here unless its actually about the story above. Want to yell at me? Send a PM.
Thank you.
epic, kicks the shit out my story, sounds like somthing my friend Steves would make, very interesting.
I'm glad you liked it. As for kicking the shit out of your story, at least yours is a fairly original idea. Wheras, as has been pointed out to me, mine isn't. Not really.
Still, even unoriginal ideas can be good stories. I learned that from Stephen King... well not directly.
oh yes forgot wonderful picture and good job on the first story, i think i'll post my story now.
Yeah I thought the picture went well with the story, even though its Left 4 Dead. It works. And glad you liked the first bit.
wow cool looking hoping to see it ^-^
Glad you are!
when will there be a number 3? also i recently found another vampire story "Cirque du freak" you should read it, manga versions better than the book, also i'm writting a new story.
If all goes well, this weekend.
Cirque de Freak eh? I'll keep an eye out for it. Did you say it was a manga?
New story? I'll swoop by to check it out.
Wanted to say Ty for commenting on me, I'm glad I wasn't just trolled to death on such a serious matter.
You're welcome.
good story cant wait for blood of the dammed part 3
Hopefully if the words come it'll be posted this weekend.
xellon2
incredible i cant wait to read more
sinfulwolf
Thank you much. Hopefully it won't be as long.