good as always, i like seeing more charactor delvelopment.....think i misspelled that but whos cares, anyways can't wait for number 6!
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Glad you like the chapter!
Nice character development, not as exciting as other chapters, but it did build upon an already excellent series, looking forward to the next chapter.
And baby wipes are very useful in the field.
Fucking right baby wipes are useful. I know how much you know it too.
Ah, I see some character development, here! That shows progress. I can't wait to see how these characters change within their surroundings. I hope the don't go insane :)
It was a good choice to make a smaller entree this time. While I do enjoy your work immensely, making shorter episodes makes it easier to sink in all of the information. Good move.
I like Haley and Jaskiewiczs' relationship. Its funny to see such a strong and independent soldier have to sit down and let a woman take care of him. It will be really interesting to see how they develop around each other. Also, thanks for showing me the pronunciation of Jaskiewicz. I really needed it :)
Found more typos than last time. Most of them involved commas, which can slip through spell check. But, it didn't interfere with the story, so its all right :)
Can't wait for the next episode!
Yeah, figured some might need help pronouncing his name... I know I did the first time I ever saw it. Glad to see you like their relaitonship.
And damn those commas... always get me.
Part 6 hopefully along soon.
i dunno, might be funny if they all went insane, every story needs an insane person, or a funny drunk.....yeah go for the drunk guy, always funnier
We'll see what happens. I like to let things flow organically.
Haha, a drunk zombie would be even better.
That's... a weird mental image. Albeit amusing.
and he has to make jokes, and his legs keeps on falling off
lol. Would be amusing... unfortunately that wouldn't really fit the mood of the rest of the story.
lol vampire lady in the pic
Indeed there is. I have not shied away from the fact that Haley is indeed a vampire.
Oh Haylays the vampre..brillant.. Loving the story a halloween special would be good :D
Indeed she is. It's why she took a bullet to the chest.
Would like to toss up a Halloween Special.
do huhr my name IS jackmeoffzxxczczsczczzccc vfuCK YOu r pronnone my name wtronbg,,,,,,,,,,,
It really is a shame; the poor quality of English that folks these days use.
its still awsome!!!:D
Glad you're enjoying.
hmm found a very good Author today. her name is redjokerx she writes poems, i would read them
Should provide a link to her.
Well written,i like it!
Glad yer liking it. You should put a post in the subscription thread to get a PM for an update.
<a href="http://redjokerx.newgrounds.com/news/post/395203">http://redjokerx.newgrounds.com/news/
post/395203</a>
dude hers the Poem Writer i was talking about.
Thanks... though I'm not a dude...
Fallschirmfuchs
Well that is good, they are getting to know each other. Can't wait to read more.
sinfulwolf
6 shoulder come sooner than usual... but we'll see. Hectic times approaching.