I enjoy writing, and I enjoy sharing what I have with folks. I suppose that makes me an entertainer of sorts. I hope you can find something of mine that you enjoy and helps pass the time. Leave a comment, or not, the choice is yours.
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johnwalrus
Wow, I'm a little late for review this one. Sorry.
I like the way you handle holidays. You don't go with the web comic approach of having all of the characters just bundle together for a Christmas photo, nor do you go the fan fiction way of just featuring a homemade jingle. I like the way this worked out.
The way Colleen depended on another man after she lost touch with her husband shows she doesn't believe much in herself. And how she regains determination to make amends really made me sad when she died. You're really good at making someone care for a character.
Mark really falls right on the border of people in a zombie apocalypse. He has the hopelessness of the situation that he believes that there is no way out, so he goes out and fulfill his desires, but he makes barricades, which shows he is really in this to survive. Nice characters!
Even if I was late on this one, I still enjoyed it. I hope you do one for the holidays!
sinfulwolf
I didn't want a happy ending for this one, as not everything in life ends happily. I wanted to show hopelessness, despair, and I think I got it. The characters are conflicted, and with all their adrenaline and fear they flip back and forth between what they want and what they think they need.
Late or not, I'm glad you enjoyed the entry.