You describe in great detail when not in dialogue. I appreciate your work. I notice no blood in this picture.
I enjoy writing, and I enjoy sharing what I have with folks. I suppose that makes me an entertainer of sorts. I hope you can find something of mine that you enjoy and helps pass the time. Leave a comment, or not, the choice is yours.
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Awesome as ever, but it almost brings a tear to my eye that it will be ending soon.
Glad yer enjoying, but all things must come to an end... also, does no body read my little intros?
It just gets better and better.
There are mysteries on the island to discover yet.
Dammit, if I hadn't been distracted, I woulda been first. Ah well. Good suspense builder. I sorely wish there was some action though. I trust you'll compensate by knocking me out of my chair with the next one. And, I note, my theory of John being Resident Evil's Wesker to this story has been proven wrong. I only guessed that because of his brutality in the last installment. Though you're really pushing my curiosity with what John truly is. It awakens a hunger for knowledge in me that I very rarely experience. I consider it skill on your part. On a negative note, it makes me more impatient for the next one. Then again, nothing's perfect. And you can't always get what you want. What's really got me concerned is your opening comment: "The end of 'Blood of the Damned' is in sight." Is this true? After such a short time? Even for an author as good as yourself, I can't help but express my concern that cutting off a series this short with so much left to go could result in a very bad, slopped up and rushed ending. If you're content with pulling that stunt, at least I'm ready to be betrayed, if nothing else. It wouldn't be the first. It happened with Kirbopher's TTA series. Just ask him about crappy season three cliffhangers. Sorry to sound paranoid, but no matter you intent, it's how that comment made me feel. Please prove me wrong. Or not. Chances are I'd still go it all the way with you, even to the train wreck. Because the series is just to good for me to ignore. Oh well.
Drooling over the juicy, seductive woman decorating your post,
DarkX.
To start, let me address your worries. I am not going to rush the ending. I hate doing that. I'll let the story come to a natural conclusion. What I simply meant is that I now see roughly where I'm going with this story. I expect I'll make it to at least Part 20. Remember though, this was never intended to be an epic, so if the story tells me that it doesn't want to go further than that, I'll let it go.
However, you also didn't vote.
As for John, like I said, his inspiration comes from Simon Garth, but not quite at the same time. So we shall see what he is in the next few chapters.
As for action, well the plot hasn't called for it as much, but I am going to have to deliver, as I haven't had much zombie killing since like... Part 3. Fuck, that's a long time ago.
Aw crap, forgot something. Before today's done, I'm gonna post. If you can, check my page for when I finish (it'll be long), comment and get the word out on the grapevine if you can, please and thank you. I know, I'm such a hypocrite, what with commenting just to advertise my things, but I wanted to put that in my original post. So please forgive me and don't remove my comment ;) Thanks, you rock, the series is awesome and no matter what, always take it to the top!
3 guys are playing a board game when someone runs in and yells "The worlds coming to an end tonight!" The first guy says "Hell! If I die tonight, it's under the covers with as many wenchs can fit!" The second guy says "Nothing I can do but go to my room and pray." But the third guy says "Well I shall finish the game."
I shall finish the game.
DarkX.
Alright, I'll keep an eye out for it.
i honestly can't decide between the two
Fair enough.
vote?
I mean Military Sci-Fi is good, but it's been done so many times.
Medieval Fantasy also been done many times, and it's hard to write.
go for the Sci-Fi
Both may have been done, but so have zombies.
Medieval Fantasy!
Although either could work.
Great episode. I can't believe it's ending soon, but all good things must come to an end. I hope it wraps up nicely.
I find the way Joey holds a gun interesting. I guess he feels like he finally has some power, or a say in what happens. I hope he doesn't abuse it.
The error demon arrived in a sentence. Nothing too bad, though.
If you do another story after this one, I suggest a sci-fi military story. Its not that I don't like medieval fantasies, its just it is usually difficult to create races and lore, and making the ye olde speech is hard. If you think you can handle it, though, go for it.
Glad your still enjoying, even to the end. Though the ending may not be coming as soon as my words may have made it seem.
I'm not a perfect writer, and so the error demon will generally rear its head at least once per chapter.
While you say its difficult to make up races and lore, fantasy doesn't always need the various races, but after seeing Avatar the other day, I kind of wanted to do a military sci-fi. We shall see what happens.
well, it was very good. And by the way, i prefer a long midevial fantasy, but ill go for either.
Glad yer enjoying. As for the next story, its 2 for 2. I wonder whom the tie breaker will be.
Good development.
Glad you are liking the evolution of the characters.
nice picture
You generally like the pictures.
so, is the Christmas Special going to be like the Halloween Special?
similar. It'l be related to the Blood of the Damned universe, but not taking place during the time of the main story line. Or if it is, its not in the same place.
Expect it tomorrow.
can i vote twice?
no.
another nice1
Glad you are enjoying. Why not cast a vote?
OMG DIS STOREH IS SOOOOO GUD U CAN B A PRO WRITR SOMEDAY RLY
I'm sure I could, however I probably won't be. It's not in my goals, I write for fun not business.
On the same note, I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
I wouldn't mind of either.
Statistics are sort of addicting.
I don't have much to share, but I am #1 in least deposits missed on NGLogs.
Tetimaru000
First comment! Sorry, couldn't resist that.