I enjoy writing, and I enjoy sharing what I have with folks. I suppose that makes me an entertainer of sorts. I hope you can find something of mine that you enjoy and helps pass the time. Leave a comment, or not, the choice is yours.
Age 35, Female
Warrior
In a dark forest
Joined on 12/27/06
Oooh... John meets Haley... I'm now in eager anticipation of the fight to come. Your skill level hasn't decreased at all and the picture was an expert choice as usual. Man, you couldn't post up the next one fast enough. Good as always. Just out of curiosity, you can describe fight scenes, right? Just checking.
Beating big, bad bitchy bastards by bowling,
DarkX
Who says it was John that Haley could smell? I meant for it to be vague, apparently I was misleading. Opps. Regardless there will be a fight next chapter, and I suppose we'll see if I can describe them or not eh?
your story always amazes me.
I'm glad it does! More to come soon as people are waiting for the fight next chapter
very good.
could this friend/ possibly enemy be a second vampire?
to be honest i really couldn't find anything i found confusing.
also i like John's thought as he commanded his new zombie minions.
very awesome
Thank you.
And perhaps it could.
The thing I thought people might find confusing is why John went to the brain through the mouth rather than the top of the skull.
this is sooooo awsome
And there wasn't even a fight. Glad yer enjoying.
well i was a little confused at first, but thinking about i came up with 2 reasons without looking at you explanation.
#1) the skull is weaker and much easier to reach the brain
#2) even if you were a zombie, walking around with your brain all exposed isn't exactly healthy
You're reason number 1 is kinda weird... perhaps just the way you worded it.
Number 2 is the reason I went for the path I did.
sorry, what i mean, is that the bone is thinner in that area, meaning it is easier to penetrate
You mean in the mouth... and not the top of the skull right? Cause the skull is one of the hardest bones in the body.
yes.
also i thought that some bone in the pelvic/ thigh area was the hardest.
The femur is the hardest. But I said the skull was ONE of the hardest.
very good story.
although something i noticed is, are the zombies in your story the kind that die from sunlight?
Zombies don't die from sunlight, but the vampires do.
i've got good news and bad news, good news is that in what very little spare time i had, i have more or less concluded my story. bad news, i never have to the spare time to put it on paper...
Your 13 and you have no spare time? Something wrong with that picture.
Good to hear you've completed the story in your head at least.
i've just had a lot to do this week, parties, homework, tests, more than one of friends is going through a rough patch in his life, so i'm helping them.
it's just been one great big hell hole
Eh. I understand. But I've seen hell holes, and that don't really seem like one.
well, it's a scheduling hell hole
That's better.
your stories give me shivers.
That's partially the idea! I'm glad I succeeded, and also that you're enjoying.
Scary zombies.
That they can be.
I must say, I'm the least bit disappointed. I love the way it is set up, and I find myself unable to stop reading. It's a great story.
I like the way John takes up the role as leader in the group. I guess they follow him because he is different, or because they like guidance. Or, maybe they just want another flesh shield who won't steal their food. Who knows.
I find the way zombies are made satisfying. Most movies and books lack the process, leaving it up to imagination. But zombies fueling their own race is pretty awesome. It means the only way to eradicate their presence is to kill every one of them. It's a cool idea.
As I continue this series, I find it getting better and better. I hope that when it ends, it ends at it's best.
I'm glad you are enjoying the series, and that the zombies are so much more than a simple lack luster villain which needs to have their brains splattered. They have their own history which will be explored a little more in my next story and explained a bit in this one. Especially their arrival in the modern era.
I do hope to not dissapoint with my ending. That is a curse with any decent story, the ending can destroy it. Hopefully if my ending isn't up to snuff the journey will be memorable enough.
Fallschirmfuchs
Wonderful
sinfulwolf
Awesome!