very interesting
Nazis are an interesting note. With projects like the Bell, i wouldn't put it past them to imagine something like this.
very good job
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They didn't really imagine it, just discover it. They did do a lot of paranormal research, around the world even, so it made sense that they would discover this. Something I'll explore more in the next story.
Those damn Nazis... they always seem to be connected with the undead. In fact, I'm now wondering why there isn't a 1945 zombie movie... actually, no that would be annoying. Nazis are too many times connected with supernatural evil. Which is why I am glad that they only discovered the virus and didn't design it. I do like how it circulated around, that was nice..
In fact, the way everything is coming around is quite nice. Although, you said no fight, yet that seems to be the set-up. Maybe a chase scene instead?
It's at this point in the story that again I should note, if ever you did publish this, I would buy it. It's just that good. You're especially good at capturing the atmosphere. That skill of yours is one of the major reasons I eagerly await the next installment after finishing each one you do.
It's also good because it's gonna give me competition for when I write my own story via posts. I'll tell you more about it in PM, but I'll give you the name: Guardian.
Alpha zombie... that's just so fucking raw. John is Alpha. Straight up, beeyotch! 4 life!!! That's so damn cool, I'll still be grinning after you read this. Just sweet. That is just TOTAL WIN.
Blowing up the port,
in need of escort
TO THE INFERNAL RESORT!!!
DarkX.
When I was thinking of how this virus came about, I had to think of who in the world would be experimenting with this crap. Then the origin came to me (which will be explained in the next story), and I decided due to geographical location, the Nazis were the best ones to have initially discovered it, due to, as I've said, their fascination with the occult. Something that's been done to death I'm aware, and why I've only touched on it.
Of course, that only explained the first bit, how it came into the modern world, but Nazis would not have released it. So it bounced about a bit. While I did have an exact reason for the virus getting out, I decided to leave it to reader imagination. Besides, sometimes the people on the ground don't know fuck all (which is what I loved about 2004's Dawn of the Dead).
I didn't say there wouldn't be a fight. Just not this chapter.\
I'm touched that you would buy it, though I don't think I'll ever publish for money. I'll put it out on a few other sites for sure though. I'm curious about this "Guardian" story of yers.
Yep, the Alpha Zombie. John was made to save humanity. Look what happened there. Though... he still does think he's saving humanity...
Brilliant...
Thank ye.
Really good entry. Shows some backstory, and explains some stuff. Clears it up.
I thought how different governments tried to take advantage of the zombies, but all just led up to their research going haywire interesting. I guess they should have learned from each other's mistakes.
I found some fun easter eggs. Like how some vampire research was in Romania (setting of Dracula), and how the project name was Charon (Ferry-man of the Undead, according to Greek mythology). I appreciate that.
I also find the different views the characters take intriguing. Haley, Jay, and Lila find the zombies a dreadful disease, while John sees them as fellow Gods.
I can't wait for the prequel. If its in medieval, what will they speak like? Will it be all "wench this" and "knave that", or will they talk normally? I don't really mind, either way.
Yeah, I thought it was time for backstory, so I filled some in.
Perhaps they should have indeed? Though, the Western governments never actually tried to raise the dead (as it was already happening world wide), just cure, or control it.
There was a purpose for the Easter Eggs as well as being just that. Ding you got Romania, but why was it called the "Impaler Virus"? Also, the decision to name it project Charon came from the fact that the project was supposed to create creatures to control the zombies, to guide them. Much like Charon guided souls to the afterlife.
Of course the characters have a different viewpoint than John. Else there wouldn't be conflict :P
Yep, the prequel is medieval. The dialogue though will be fairly normal because I can't write ye olde English.
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VS02xaTIdRI">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VS02xa TIdRI</a>
did you see this?
i want to see it so bad
I remember watching the original one, and reading a novelization of it when I was little. It does look good, I wonder how much they changed for the modern audience?
i guess i need to start work on number 12.
i just did the math, and the series might stretch to 30 or more. I've got a lot of work to do.
Also "Impaler Virus" Good 'ol Vlad shoving sticks up peoples asses and leaving them in a field, i can't believe i missed that.
30 or more? Christ, I think Blood of the Damned is only gonna make it to 20 or so. I'm not going to stretch it out else I'll loose the atmosphere.
Yeah, I thought I was being pretty obvious with that one. Though he didn't always leave them in a field... what good would that do.
he put them in the field to scare away invading armies.
and yeah, 30 or so, i'm not stretching it i honestly figured out that i need that many.
Yeah, put also along roads, in cities. Really, armies didn't often pass through fields. Roads were faster. Anyway...
I didn't assume you were, I was just saying how long mine was gonna be.
My Post now
Yer post now...?
why not be a writer for like a movie.work with rob zombie.i enjoyed your story but i dont feel like going all the way back to the first.
It's hard to get to work for someone like Rob Zombie. Especially considering from what I've seen of his work, I don't think what I want to write and what he wants to show are on the same page. Nothing against the man, I love his movies, and I enjoy his music, but we don't tell stories the same way.
You don't have to all the way back to part 1, but some folks would say you're missing out. Still, the story is here for enjoyment. And it be free.
wait your in the military?how does it look to be in the mist of war.to hear gun shots and look at the dead bodies of your fallen commrads.
Well... thanks for putting it so kindly. Here's the truth: Firefights are the ultimate adrenaline rush. You're blood coursing beneath the skin, heart pouding, its almost like a drug. Gun shots whippin past, yeah at first they scared the shit outta me, but I got over it, got used to it.
But dead comrades. Thanks for the tact and subtlety there. It's a horrible fucking feeling to see someone you're as close as family with laying next to you covered in his own blood. Even just any other soldier, of any NATO nation, felt like shit when you saw them. Those were some of the hardest moments of my life, and I don't put that lightly.
I don't know if your some kind of anti-war protester or something, but keep your protests for the government and not the soldiers. They aren't the ones who make policies, they aren't the one who declare wars. So instead of bringing it down on their heads, why don't you look at the government that was democratically elected to represent your interests.
Those two little lines there were some of the most insensitive things I've heard out of someone for a long time. Why don't you get to know the world a little bit before throwing the blame at someone who only tried to help, and succeeded. There's a family that still has their son in Afghanistan because of me. There's another family that still has their mother because of what I did.
Gee. THANKS for this beautiful WALL-O-TEXT.
Your welcome. Tis the entire point.
oh cool you changed your page.
nice picture, like badass
I tried to change the header but the picture was much too large. Oh well. I'll work on it.
i just asked a question and you suddenly say im against the war.im just fine with the war.what can i do its just human nature to destroy.i cant stop instinct!!
Well, sorry for over reacting. Regardless on your political views, it's quite rude to be so blunt about the brutalities of combat. Dead friends is not something I like to dwell on is all.
im sorry to im just a very big mouth little girl.im not really sensitive so ill speak my mind without care for others emotions.
Ah, I see. Well just try to be careful, especially about talking about dead friends.
HEY! NAZIS ARE MY THING! FIND YOUR OWN GOD DAMN BAD GUYS!
no no no im just joking. your story is just awesome its as good as everyone says. by the way is that picture from residant evil or something? it looks like it. i didnt know your in the army or were in the army. thats pretty cool i hope to enlist when im old enough
Nazis weren't really the villain per say. Just a factor. Heh.
Glad you are enjoying the story though. The picture is just a random one I found through google image search.
Yeah, I'm in the army, infantry to be specific. It's a good job, but it has its moments.
fallensoul289
Of all the zombie movie's I have seen this would make a great movie. This has aspects of everything you would want in a movie. Looking forward to the next update.
sinfulwolf
A movie would be cool. Though I don't see it happening. Alas.
More to come, I ain't finished with this one just yet.