freakin baddass, AGAIN.
you are making this so awesome.
i need to finish mine.
still good job as always, can't wait for the fight.
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Heh, I do try. I was originally gonna have Haley say some cheesy one liner at the end, but I found it took away too much from the content already presented.
Glad yer enjoying zero, the fight is obviously next chapter.
youll never change.
How will I never change?
still with your story and scary ass pics but your still awsome!!!also sorry for calling you a hoe.
I'm really enjoying writing this story and the pictures fit I think. It's okay, I forgive you.
Nice...
Glad you like.
Normally, I would have a lot to say... but I'm just amazed to still have a face, this was SO INTENSE. BEST ONE YET!
CRAP!!! THE INTENSITY OF THIS PICTURE HAS DESTROYED MY CAPS LOCK KEY!!! AND TEH EPICNESS OF TEH PIKTURR HAVE DEESTROYED MY ENGLISHES. WAT SHUD I DU BUT BECAUSE AW CRAP IT WAS ZOMGIES HOLY CRAP, THIS ROCKED!!!
SUMTHING LIKE THAT...
UHHHH..
GOOD, MOAR PLZ!!!!
MOAR!!!
WHAT A MONOLOGUE EH?!?!?! HOW'S THAT FOR SPAM-LESS SPAM?
DARK X.
Wow, I don't think I've ever seen you write like that, so this must be a pretty decent entry. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Whew! I was actually kinda scared you would delete it under the idea that it was spam! Glad you didn't. I wrote like that because I honestly thought it WAS rip-your-face-off-INTENSE (Multiple entendre!). I originally intended to make my comment short because this installment was short and damn awesome. Maybe your best yet. But then, my comment got out of hand and went into a whole mind-destroying shpeel. And it ended up that I hoped you would have perceived it as funny. I know that your response was pretty damn funny, considering how shocked you made yourself sound. I just hope that this doesn't make you think less of me and that it got a smile out of you.
But I can't help it. I want MOAR!!!!!!!!
MOAR
DarkX
Yes well ye did get a smile out of me. I'm glad others are enjoying reading this as much as I enjoy writing it.
More will come.
hmmm, have you ever thought of animating this into Flash form?
it would be very kickass
I've thought about it, but alas I not only don't have flash, I have zero skills with flash, and in the end, it would be crap if I made it.
But it is worthy of animation. So, she shouldn't do anything to the animation end at all, not if she can't. Instead, wait for the Writers Portal. It's bound to get front page. When it does, a good animator will notice and request to be the proud animator of the series. Approval will be given at her discretion and a legend will be born. I'm confident of this plan's success because:
A) Unless someone gives me a link or a book that 1-ups this, THIS REALLY IS THE BEST LITERATURE I HAVE READ PERTAINING TO ZOMBIE APOCALYPSES. Publications and cinema is what deserves. No joke.
B) There are expert animators on this site. Someone good enough to live up to the standards that Sin has set will come along and ask. When they do, all this will be given life.
C) And I'm willing to lend my voice for the voice acting. I'd be willing to do Joey or John. John preferably. Jay... I'm not sure if I can quite match what I hear in my head when I read Jay's lines. I think there might be someone more suited to his part.
Jsut you wait Sin. The requests will come in by the truckloads. ;)
I know that if I was an animator, I would ask.
Waiting for that day to come,
DarkX.
I'm also waiting for MOAR!!!!!!!!
I wouldn't mind seeing it animated either. It could be quite interesting in a good animators hands. Now, as vain as I can be about my writing, I'm not going to say it will happen because most of the best animators already have their hands full with their own stories they want to tell, and with their own lives.
Also, batting away my own vanity for once, I do think this story is good. The best literature going to zombie apocalypses. No, I'd give that to Max Brook's "World War Z" (http://www.randomhouse.com/crown /worldwarz/index2.php) which is the best zombie story I've ever read. It was simply amazing. The Battle of Yokers was terrifying and awesome at the same time.
Voice acting is not my call at all, more the animator and how he sees it. I myself would just be helping with the script, should such a day arrive.
I'm not holding my breath, and you shouldn't either.
In the meantime, I still have to finish Blood of the Damned, and then work on War of the Damned, which I'm actually quite excited for and have been gathering pictures.
yeah, maybe you could get someone else to do it for you.
i would love to help, but i have nothing in the means of animation or audio.
but i'd love to see this animated or perhaps some Art of it or something.
Animation would be nice, but since I can't work on it due to lack of programs/skills, I'm not demanding anything of it. Rather, I'll work on my writing.
As for art, I may or may not put up some rough sketches. Nothing to get me in the art portal as I'm not that good a drawer, but something just for reference.
OH YEAH I ALMOST FORGOT!
BIOSHOCK 2 CAME OUT TODAY!
but i can't get it cause life's just not awesome like that.
Meh, I never got into Bioshock. Dante's Inferno however also came out today, which I've spent most of the day playing. I love it.
it did?
damn, i forgot about that one too.
tell me if i have this right
In Dante's Inferno, your in Hell and you run around and kill tons of demons to save your wife? Only alot more badass.
Dante's Inferno is a reinterpretation of one specific section of Dante's Divine Comedy. In this interpretation you, Dante, a Crusader knight decide to go to the depths of hell to save your wife who was taken due to a wager she made with Lucifer. In order to get to hell you kill Death, and take his scythe, then begin to traverse the 9 circles of hell.
interesting.
In a good way?
interesting.
It sounds almost kinda sweet, going through hell to save your wife.
Reminds me of Dead Space.
Yes... but mostly a huge resounding no. Dead Space is scary, Dante's Inferno is not.
the story and your profile.i think that since your in the army you may put your experiences or what you may have felt during your time in the war.
I do try a little bit. It's not very noticeable in this particular story though.
to be honest Dead Space is one of the more sweet games i've played, Issac is looking for his wife after all.
Eh, Dead Space seems pretty good so far, but it has little to do with Issac searching for his wife.
it will later, right now Hammond is probaly telling you to fix the ship or something
No... I meant my enjoyment of the game has little to do with Isaac looking for his wife.
well yeah, it's blowing some arms off those motherfucking Necromorphs.
but when i played it and i fought all these things i was thinking, "Wow, Isaac really loves this chick."
I haven't gotten that far yet... like I said, other games.
Hmmm, so John can renew flesh, too? What exactly makes them do that? An increase in platelets? Or, is it magic? I would like to know.
I like how John speaks. He sounds like something right out of Paradise Lost. It amazes me.
Can't wait for the climatic battle. Hope it's good.
I haven't revealed everything about the vampires yet, but John's increased vampire genetics is why he can regenerate.
I take a lot of time thinking of John's dialogue. He's a bugger.
It should come soon. Early next week.
yeah i know, but when you play it, just think in the back of your mind. "This guys doing it for his wife."
Okay then.
Pronanbayu
this story amazes me more as the chapters go on.
sinfulwolf
I'm glad you enjoy it so. I do try to entertain.