how i love the beauty and dynamics of this story.
I enjoy writing, and I enjoy sharing what I have with folks. I suppose that makes me an entertainer of sorts. I hope you can find something of mine that you enjoy and helps pass the time. Leave a comment, or not, the choice is yours.
Jackie
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I'm really glad your enjoying it.
your story is freaky deaky dude.
I tried. Also... I'm not a dude.
Awesome entry. I loved the way you illustrated everything, with such power and strength. An epic battle I'd loved to have seen.
So, this is close to the end, right? The last threat has vanished, and the text is pointing it out. Over all, I'm happy to have been a part of this. Hopefully, your next project will be even better.
Everyone was telling me how they were waiting for this fight, so I really had to make it something that readers could envision in their minds. I do hope I succeeded.
Yes, this is indeed close to the end. There is one more closing chapter in this one, and then we start up the next story, which I've been looking forward to writing for awhile now.
If there's any possible way to even tell you how good this is in a single word, it's a word I don't know. This is just beyond description, beyond belief and beyond such boundaries that I've never seen the likes of before. And I mean that in the way best way possible. To simply regard this as "epic," does not even give an illusion of doing this amazing installment the justice it so rightly deserves. Just so you know, in full understanding of it's true connotations, "Trip," is an adjective I reserve for things that are so good as to redefine "raising the bar." Years from now, I'll come back to this site, this url and say "Ho-ly shit, what a trip," just because it is.
Just because IT IS.
Be honored. This is hands down the most unforgettable series I have ever read yet. Bar none. I want to plan a trip to Canada and meet you in person. It's not often someone would get the chance to talk with a visionary such as yourself.
And if all that didn't make any sense or sounds nonsensical, just understand you have a 100% true blue fan in me.
And that sexy picture is just the cherries on top of this Tower of Babel high chocolate cake with whipped cream...
DarkX.
Well then. I've succeeded in my primary objective, which was to entertain. That you have enjoyed this so thoroughly I can be at ease the the climax was up to snuff. Hopefully I can put down a decent "after the action" ending.
So, I am indeed honoured that you enjoy this so very much.
Forgot to mention, my brain is melting now.
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*ugh*
*collapses*
*Brain activity= 0%*
*Brain melt complete*
Hunh... brain puddle... *pokes with toe*
Silly brain can't think of a proper response... I'll be back as soon as I think of something...
Don't you hate when that happens? I'll wait.
brutal isn't enough to describe the awesome.
its just....i don't know.
metal
metal, cool. Wait till the prequel, there are some epic scenes planned for that one.
Ya wanted an update on my page?
YOU GOT ONE!
Warning: it contains a serious attitude problem that's directed at no one in particular...
I see...
kool
Glad you enjoyed.
Wuz up
uh... the story.
You never replied, so I thought you left for a bit =.=
To be honest it was kickass but I thought it was kinda a short lived one sided battle. As for jay, I would be pissed I lost my leg and you can't kill him off he might be the last man on earth. I think you should make a sequel to this and make a online book as well as sell it, because you truly are a gifted writer and you're stories convey exactly what you want them to. I look forward to the last chapter and a possible sequel if you're up for it. I think doing a follow up would be nice at least like a chapter to tell what happened after the end.
I didn't make the fight that drawn out as most fights in real life don't last very long. I try to convey a sense of realism amidst the fantasy and weirdness of my stories.
There will be one more chapter to close off the story, so its just not fading into the night. As for a sequel... well I'm not sure. I don't have anything in mind to continue the story, but we'll see what happens after the prequel.
Well disreguard my comments about a sequel I see what you are doing. But also I wanted to add that all you need is a artist to draw the illistrations and you got yourself a top notch book :3.
A great artist would be awesome, instead of having to use pictures I found on the internet, because they don't always convey the imagery I want. I get as close as I can however.
I'm actually quite excited about writing the prequel.
my friend lent me Dante's Inferno
AND ITS FREAKIN AWESOME!
It is pretty damn good. I'm pretty sure I'm fighting Lucifer right now.
I didn't receive any notifications after that either, so meh.
though judging from the first level, i can tell its a fairly short game
still it be awesome.
Yeah... fairly short. Still, it's been fun.
Alright, kthx.
Why so complicated?
It just occurred to me... talk has circulated around about this story getting it's very own art and, even more so, animated into a series. But any artist curteous enough to request your permission to do art/ animate this will ask what exactly you want. As in style and appearance. But that's the question: what exactly do you see? I know that, to some degree, you're not really all that fickle, but I know that making this required some visualization on your part. How exactly did you imagine all this? I always kinda thought of gothic drawings with a touch of anime and realistic air. What do you think?
Less anime actually. Though I do enjoy some of it, I've always seen what I present as more of a western "style". Gothic could work, especially with the vampire aspect of everything, but realism is mostly what I imagine in my mind. I may or may not some day put up rough (and I mean rough, I'm not a good artist) sketches of some things.
I also envision different things for the different stories in this "of the damned" universe. For Blood I envisioned something much more realistic. Very obviously modern. For War, more gothic, more fantasy to reflect the much more fantasy themed plots and characters.
zerogeass
brutal
sinfulwolf
I did try.