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I enjoy writing, and I enjoy sharing what I have with folks. I suppose that makes me an entertainer of sorts. I hope you can find something of mine that you enjoy and helps pass the time. Leave a comment, or not, the choice is yours.

Jackie @sinfulwolf

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DarkX64 2010-02-22 06:50:23

The only thing that mars this ending is the fact that it's sunrise and Haley's a vampire. But the ride has ended. The struggle is over. And even though I never commented on the previous chapters, this was a ride I enjoyed from start to finish. Because I did read it all. Enjoyed it all. Remembered it all. And there's no way I'll forget this. It's been a hell of a ride. Nice riding with ya.

Thanks for the grade A read,

DarkX.

PS: Did you get my last comment on the semi final installment? I left a comment that was unanswered. When you reply to this (and you will, you know it), give me your answer. Thanks a lot.

PPS: Sometime within the next two-three days, I'm gonna make a new post. My last one was kinda dumb and I aim to fix it. Nothing important, but what the hell.

sinfulwolf 2010-02-22 06:50:23

I'm very happy you enjoyed, you've always delivered good feedback and gave me something amusing to read with your comments. So you're welcome for the read.
Now, as for Haley being out on the dock while the sun is starting to rise, I was aware. Alluded to that with Haley's dry remark of "I hope they hurry". However, it could become less "out there" after a bit of a dip into War of the Damned.

DarkX64 2010-02-22 06:58:04

Actually, forget the first post script, read your response. And I only suggested anime because:

A) No matter how hard one may try, supernatural phenomenon is EXACTLY that. You can't make it real. With that mindset, I believed it should be embraced. And

B) Having anime art style will be beneficial to the fight scenes, as they would become much more stylized and have more impact I believe.

But that's just my opinion. And what you see matters more cuz you made the series. :)

Signing out for now,

DarkX.

sinfulwolf 2010-02-22 06:58:04

You can embrace something not being real, without having to fall back on an anime style. It just isn't me, I've never really liked the style very much. I like realistic style for my work because it suits me, suits that despite the strange tapestry of the story I try to tell, I like to make the characters and world real despite the very strange happenings going on.
As to the fights, I don't think they'd have more impact. In fact I think they'd have less of an impact with an anime style. I always tried to have short and brutal fights. I've never liked that many fights in most anime shows. It was too... unreal. Delayed blood spurts, lots of jumping about with motion lines... I could go on. I see something much more akin to say... "Kingdom of Heaven". Loved the fight scenes in that, never that long, no slow motion time, just *clash, clash, splash*. That's what I want, especially for the upcoming War of the Damned.

fallensoul289 2010-02-22 09:24:54

I think it was a hell of a ride. A fitting end to this story now you have to work on the prequel.

sinfulwolf 2010-02-22 09:24:54 (Updated 2010-02-22 10:58:42)

Indeed I do, and I'm starting it now. It should be up soon.

1234momo101 2010-02-22 18:00:10

kool lalalalalalalala

sinfulwolf 2010-02-22 18:00:10

Thank you

Tetimaru000 2010-02-22 18:18:05

First thing I noticed was the F word =c
Nice ending, where's the story archive?

zerogeass 2010-02-22 20:58:41

a wonderful end to an amazing story.

i smiled when you mentioned the frying pan, brings those memories of Dead Rising back to me.

you truly are an amazing author.

sinfulwolf 2010-02-22 20:58:41

Why thank you.

As to the frying pan, I'm glad it brought back amusing memories, but I was honestly just trying to think of something fairly common that didn't need power that could be heated up to cauterize a wound. Frying pan was the second thing that came to mind (first was a torch).

And again, thank you.

BIuefox 2010-02-23 02:23:43

wow simply epic. You are a amazing writer ever think about making and publishing a book?

sinfulwolf 2010-02-23 02:23:43

Thought about it, but my work is a bit short for that. I write simply to entertain and I can do that for free of charge. I'll get my money elsewhere.

Also, thank you.

And... did you read the whole thing or just this chapter?

Pronanbayu 2010-02-23 16:46:28

why did you have to end it?!!! WHY????!!!!!!!!

sinfulwolf 2010-02-23 16:46:28

Because I didn't want to drag it out. This felt like a natural ending to me, so I let it end when it wanted.

idolred588 2010-02-23 20:01:08

great ending to a great story. i havent read all of it yet but im reading as much as i can and will finish soon. have you thought of making another story

sinfulwolf 2010-02-23 20:01:08

I am starting work on a prequel to this one actually. Less focus on zombies, and much more focus on vampires, with a broader scope for plot. I hope it turns out well as I'm trying some new things with it.

zerogeass 2010-02-24 16:06:38

i suppose a frying pan would work, if you could get it hot enough.

i really need to get on top of things and keep writing again.

sinfulwolf 2010-02-24 16:06:38

I'm not entirely sure if it would work myself. I've not had an experience with a frying pan. I think it might be able to work... just not as effectively as open flames.

Bakuganstar3 2010-02-24 18:52:49

hey there friend.

sinfulwolf 2010-02-24 18:52:49

Guten Tag

zerogeass 2010-02-24 18:57:38

it should work perfectly

just not sure how you could heat it up that much.

sinfulwolf 2010-02-24 18:57:38

yeah... we just found a plot hole in my own story. Damnit.

zerogeass 2010-02-24 22:55:41

who says they couldent have left in a fire for like a long time

sinfulwolf 2010-02-24 22:55:41

*shrugs* sounds like a bit of a cop-out really. Still, the story isn't perfect. Looking back at it, I see quite a few issues.

Tetimaru000 2010-02-24 23:19:16

I'm just saying you should make an accessible link on every chapter if it isn't too much work.

Tetimaru000 2010-02-25 18:37:53

When do you find the time to write?

icefire23 2010-02-25 21:46:00

Yes the girl knows how i feel and YES the other guy knows how i feel about the girl. so what ELSE can i do?

sinfulwolf 2010-02-25 21:46:00

Well if she knows how you feel and she still isn't commiting to any relationship, I'd say you might want to consider moving on, or figuring out a suave way of wooing her. Ranting and raging doesn't work, and if she caught wind of it, she would simply assume that you're jealous. You're not even in a relationship and your jealous, that doesn't look good for you. Not trying to be mean, just being blunt.

icefire23 2010-02-25 21:51:32

My post are clear as clear can be. and i've calmed down now.

sinfulwolf 2010-02-25 21:51:32

Well that's good, though I'd rather you bring this to conversation to PMs to keep this area clear for those who want to talk about my writing, or their own writing. Besides this being your personal life, I don't know how much you want others looking into it.

narutosonicfan 2010-02-27 00:24:35

Well, you probably don't remember me but, a new chapter's up. (look back to previous posts for details)

sinfulwolf 2010-02-27 00:24:35

I'll check it out.

narutosonicfan 2010-02-27 19:48:14

Thanks for the advice! By next chapter, I can promise you that your questions will be answered.

sinfulwolf 2010-02-27 19:48:14

Looking forward to it.

zerogeass 2010-02-28 03:43:33

i found a rather interesting Zombie related song

<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OARmqz48Mh0">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OARmqz 48Mh0</a>

i find it just awesome.

sinfulwolf 2010-02-28 03:43:33

thank you for sharing.

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