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I enjoy writing, and I enjoy sharing what I have with folks. I suppose that makes me an entertainer of sorts. I hope you can find something of mine that you enjoy and helps pass the time. Leave a comment, or not, the choice is yours.

Jackie @sinfulwolf

Age 36, Female

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In a dark forest

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Tetimaru000 2010-03-13 00:30:57

I love your descriptive words.
Nice picture, too.
Oh, and I subscribed ^^

DarkX64 2010-03-13 23:46:54

Oooh... a little raunchy are we?

I found it to be a quite an irony that she is an outcast more because of how she's a lesbian (or bisexual, whatever) than the fact that she's a vampire. At least, that's what I picked up from the repeated use of "despite...they accepted her." If' I'm wrong, tell me.

Anyway, this is a good start. Sounds, looks and even feels like a Sinfulwolf classic. Even has a good picture to match. I'm sure that, if I had one, I would give this one my proof of approval sticker. For now, you'll have to settle with a post saying "This was good."

It couldn't be stopped! I got a hard on when I got to the nudey part. Dammit, what I wouldn't give to be where Katelyn is, vampire chicks are THE BEST...

DarkX.

PS: This reminded me of a good song I heard and I decided to share it with you. Here: <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JMhSWEu6r6c">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JMhSWE u6r6c</a> . It's a tad repetitive and long, but beautiful regardless. Beautiful like your writing. Tell me what you think.

sinfulwolf 2010-03-13 23:46:54

Only a little. I felt it fit into the story and the character. The original idea was to have an actual sex scene, but this fit better.

You actually are wrong in regards to that line. She was referencing the old Pagans who more readily accepted her despite being a vampire, because they were more willing to accept otherworldly beings. Still, sleeping with a woman would cast a rather disapproving glare from the new Christian villagers.

Glad you like the start, and that it feels like something that came from me. I still always try to find good pictures to match. Sometimes its a little more difficult. Don't worry though, I will accept the post saying "this was good"

It is a sexual scene, an erection isn't unheard of. Though don't forget that Katelyn is near death in this sequence.

The song was very nice, and it would have fit nicely. It reminds me of Apocalyptica, whom I did listen to whilst writing this part, and will listen to for further parts. Here, I'll give ya an example of their work.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lw 2ZKHWh_Zg

Tetimaru000 2010-03-14 00:02:00

Heh, yep, it shows alright.
How long will this be?

Fallschirmfuchs 2010-03-14 00:24:21

Good intro...

sinfulwolf 2010-03-14 00:24:21

Thank ye.

DarkX64 2010-03-14 13:18:43

That youtube link you gave didn't work... but I found them and they're good. Very different, yet graceful and beautiful.

Yeah, she may be near death... but I just find the whole fang thing erotic. No jokes. And I'm absolutely ok with the policy of "Bite and don't tell," heh heh...

Ah well... does that affect her relations with the towns people at all? And furthermore, how do you pronounce that name???

And maybe it's just me, but there seem to be less people commenting on here. How many people are subscribed? It seems like not that many people are taking notice. And considering how good this is, that kinda disappoints me. Alas.

Do you have a youtube page? If you do, I can see all your favorite musical tastes and I can share mine with you much easier. Because I have one. Get back to me when you can.

DarkX.

sinfulwolf 2010-03-14 13:18:43

Guh, didn't work? Oh well. You saw them anyway.

Hey, to each their own. Vampires do indeed have an erotic element to them, and that wasn't something I captured in "Blood" and wanted to try my hand at here.

Katelyn's relations with the townsfolk will be explored more in following chapters. And whose name are you talking about? Katelyn (which is like Caitlin, or Kaitlin) or Gwenhwyfar (which is closer sounder to modern day Jennifer)? Regardless, I answered both.

As for less people, yeah I dunno. Not too many people seemed interested in following after the last one. That or no one ever reads the Author's Notes I put up in every chapter that holds news. To anyone reading this response, read the Author's notes.

No I don't have a youtube page.

purplemuffinman 2010-03-14 16:43:42

good story nao.but be a little more creative.

sinfulwolf 2010-03-14 16:43:42

Thank ye. But how to ye mean more creative? I mean, I've only just started. I've yet to bring in the main conflict even.

Tetimaru000 2010-03-14 18:36:35

How long does it usually take you to write a chapter?

zerogeass 2010-03-14 20:44:04

fucking amazing. Truthfuly i am at a loss for words here, it was just too epic.

one qeustion though.

how the fuck do you pronounce Gwenhwyfar?

sinfulwolf 2010-03-14 20:44:04

Glad you enjoyed it.

Gwenhwyfar is pronounced much the same as Jennifer, or so I've been told. Treat the "hwy" as an 'i'. This is what I've been told, so until someone speaking old Welsh corrects me, this is what I'm passing on.

Tetimaru000 2010-03-14 22:31:39

Why would that be?

DarkX64 2010-03-15 00:20:40

Blargh, no youtube account? I know you can't upload videos, but I recommend you get one for no other reason than this: If you stumble upon a good and/or funny video/ song and you don't have an account, there's a big chance that you won't find it again. Having an account alleviates the problem, allowing you to favorite whatever you see fit. Well, even if you don't have one, I'll give mine (and hope the link works): <a href="http://www.youtube.com/user/DarkX64?feature=mhw4">http://www.youtube.com/user/DarkX64?f eature=mhw4</a> . If ever you're bored with truly nothing to do, you can pay my page a visit and find some good music, funny crap and other good stuff. Also, since you liked A Shadow of Doubt, there's other songs from the same Escaflowne soundtrack. Dance of Curse is especially excellent. My favorite battle theme.

Anyway, I thank you for clearing up the pronunciation dilemma. But I note that I didn't phrase my question properly. I meant to ask how Gwenhwyfar's orientation affects her relationship to the village. Is the affect at all apparent? Is it overlooked because of what she is? Or is this something to toy with later on? I only ask because I would think that, in the setting of this particular story, such a characteristic could alter a lot and, as such, I believe warrants a significance and weight.

That's all for now.

Good Morning from Fairview Park, boring as hell and filled to the brink with old people.

DarkX.

PS: I'm not angered or anything about my location... but this place is pretty darn boring.

sinfulwolf 2010-03-15 00:20:40

I bookmark videos I particularly like, but I'll take a look through yer account to find stuff to watch/listen to.

As to Gwen's relationship with the village, given her sexual openness, that's something I may or may not toy with. However, her sexuality will have more ramifications later on with various characters.

DarkX64 2010-03-15 00:26:06

Oh wait...

Have you noticed that your e and n are in the wrong places? Here's a hint: "War of the D****d."

It's not a comeback to that "strokes," remark... but I'll take what I can get. I'll think of something as good as that, just you wait and see...

Good night/morning/afternoon/whatever/who cares?

DarkX.

sinfulwolf 2010-03-15 00:26:06

Ah, I did have a typo in my post title. Fixed now, thanks for pointing it out.

Tetimaru000 2010-03-15 18:46:16

I need more of a social life...

sykokid3 2010-03-16 14:37:32

I dont have time to read this !

sinfulwolf 2010-03-16 14:37:32

Then why comment?

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