my face just melted
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That good?
Zero, you need a break...
Nice fight sequence. I like the twist how they all suddenly turn out to be vampires in the end. This Du Lac guy looks like fun.
Another "damned," series is starting up and my heart is astir. Oh yeah.
So, though I don't have much to say this time round, I do have a question: Is Gwen the true main protagonist like Haley and Lila were in Blood?
You never fail to remind me that I subscribed for a reason.
"The dream is dead,"
DarkX.
Poor Zero...
Glad you liked the fight, and the bit of the twist at the end. Du Lac is an interesting character. I've got more planned for him.
Gwen is indeed the main protagonist, much like Haley. Why didn't you mention Jay? Though this story promises to have many more characters than just four.
Glad yer enjoying so very much.
Whoops. Didn't mean to leave Jay out. I only picked Haley and Lila because they were around the longest. Jay came in a little later, and Joey died. That's just my reasoning.
Oh well.
"Subversion to my will is the only choice,"
-DarkX
Lol, fair enough. I always thought Jay more important than Lila though. Even though he wasn't around as long.
I'm not really familiar with those.
Happy Saint Patricks Day
To ye as well.
Do you think up the title of the story and/or chapters before you write the story, after, before you thoroughly plan out the idea, or what?
Do you edit all your own work?
What piece of work would that be?
this chapter was better and i love the pic.
Glad you enjoyed it.
The picture is a screen cap from the film 30 Days of Night. Seemed to fit here. I did have another picture I was going to use, a medieval knight that looked like a vampire zombie thing. It would have worked but it didn't look as good.
Very creative! The description is amazing... the only thing I would say is that you might not want to flip from Gwen to her full name. At least not in description... like you said "Gwen's home" but you had never refered to her as just Gwen. I would just introduce her as Gwen or call her Gwenhwyfar, unless it's an old aquantice like when the other vampire called her Gwen.
Please excuse the spelling lol i have to vocabulary of a college student and the spelling ability of a second grader :)
Thank you very much for the input. You also make a good point. I have been trying to make a point of calling her Gwenhwyfar in the description and occasionally call her Gwen in dialogue from other characters. Sometimes Gwen does slip out though, and it's something I have to keep an eye on.
Yer spelling is excused. I didn't really note any glaring errors, and I understood exactly what you meant.
Tetimaru000
Where do you come up with the creative names?