very good, as usual, Du Lac seems very interesting, i'm sure he will play a bigger part in this, no?
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Oh yes he will.
And i wil be looking forward to it. but i really need to get on top of things.
i have a lot of free time now, so hopefuly i'll get something done.
Unrelated
I just saw the trailer for Ghost Recon: Future Soldier.
it looks awesome.
Glad ye are. Means I'm doing something right.
And yes, you do need to work on your story. It's falling behind. Keep it up and I might "Lap" you chapter wise.
I'll look it up.
Is the spacing between the lines regular formatting for blog postings?
And yeah...10 year olds playing rated M games...
Even the dialogue?
That's a good way to format it.
I wonder why they format books the way they do.
Another good picture, another good installment...
It must be sinfulwolf. :)
Don't worry about the politics. I think you are fully capable of striking a good balance between politics, personal stories and action. And even so, these are the politics of olde. They have a certain intrigue to them that modern day politics lack. So, don't fret it unless someone really complains about it. And you haven't bored me yet. Relax.
In fact, I very much thought that the impact of the actions of Du Lac being shown in action AND in politics gives him a level of intrigue you have with other good characters, namely John and Gwen. While I know you stated that you really liked Gwen, you're also taking the time to really give life (or lack of it... :) to Du Lac. Especially in that, he's been causing concern and unrest even before we find out much about the guy! It really gives him this dark and mysterious feel whenever his name is mentioned, I'm in eager anticipation to hear his story.
On that note, I want to say that I really think this is starting to outshine B.Ot.D. Your characters have even more depth to them, a feat I honest to God didn't think you could do. Simply because, they were incredible in the first series and you somehow one upped that. Just plain mind blowing, I tell ya. 0_0. The universe of this particular story is much more alive, with every event comparable to a ripple in water. The atmosphere is somehow darker and even more foreboding, more this, more that...
I asked for MOAR and I got MOAR!
You never fail to amaze, surprise and deliver. Grade S (Supreme) literature, this definitely IS.
How is my work ever going to compare?
-DarkX
PS: Sorry I didn't get to this right away. Been busy.
Ha, glad you like both chapter and picture. Victoria Frances is a great artist.
I'm not worried about the politics. I'm going to write the story as I want to, and how it wants to. I was simply putting out a disclaimer of sorts so people some what know what they are getting into.
I did state that I liked Gwen, but just because she's my favorite does not mean I will treat other characters unjustly, as readers may greatly enjoy characters other than my favorites. Lord du Lac is an interesting person, and I have been tinkering with his background a bit. I'll have fun with him.
I did very much want to make this story darker, and more in depth than I did Blood of the Damned. I do think I am succeeding in that aspect. More shall unfold...
....but not in the dark.
Yes, by the power of electricity, which might just eventually run out
Who knows what the future will bring. Lately, I've been reading into sci-fi. What genre would you classify your story in?
You should incorporate a bit of horror.
At least, that's what most vampire stories are about. (Bleah, except twilight...)
I do not lie in modern times then.
What do most vampire stories include nowadays, may I ask?
Who brought romance and vampires together...?
When you think about it thought, vampires and romance don't typically go together. It's always about broken, forbidden romance.
Mostly for girls, huh?
I guess I just don't agree with what everyone else thinks. I definitely wouldn't associate love and vampires.
Then can't pretty much any mythical/believed to be mythical/non-seen creatures have tons of romance as well?
Werewolves/Romance?
Besides the conflict I hear people keep talking about in the Twilight Saga I've never heard of a connection between that...
Tends to be female authors who write the romantic counterparts.
zerogeass
PWND found it before you told me.
now to actualy read it.
sinfulwolf
haha. Way to pay attention.