Alright, second comment! Well, good story so far, worth the wait. Keep it up, this is getting to the good part.
I enjoy writing, and I enjoy sharing what I have with folks. I suppose that makes me an entertainer of sorts. I hope you can find something of mine that you enjoy and helps pass the time. Leave a comment, or not, the choice is yours.
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Glad you enjoy, and even happier that it was worth the wait. I do hope I can get the next parts out much sooner.
Congratulations on your contest entry :D
..... I don't talk much
okay... yer point being?
Pretty awesome, as usual.
the wolf seqeunce was pretty cool, i'm loving your work.
Thank ye, and I enjoyed writing the wolf sequence. Was thinking of doing more, but it just didn't fit.
your one of the best writes I know
Why thank ye.
hmmmmmmmmmmm you mind if I hug you?
uh... maybe. I don't even really know you, and you have a tendency to flip around and start cursing out people who try to act you're friend from what I've seen on other folk's pages.
why not turn this into a flash vid?
I wish I wish. But alas I have not the skills, nor the programs. I'm a horrible artist. That said, if someone approached me wanting to make it, I'd probably be rather protective and making sure they were a decent animator that wouldn't ruin my little tale here.
thats to bad :( with some good voices great art this would have been an awsome flash.
Probably. Still, with the amount of stuff I have written, It'd more than likely take a few videos to do, and I'm not sure how dedicated someone would be to making what could end up being quite a few videos based around a single story.
i never miss a chance to tell aspiring artist how amazing there work is. Also yes i do think writing is a art style.
I agree with you there. Writing is my form of art, I create people and worlds and paint with words. How well I do this is up to the reader of course.
*growls* hmmmmmmmmmmm I am hungry
Then throw some waffles in the toaster or something. What am I supposed to do?
I am so sorry for the late comment. I fell terrible, but I hope this makes up for my absence. Explanations to come...
Anyway, that's not why I'm here. I'm here because it's the work of the ever expert and powerful writer, otherwise known as Sinfulwolf (that's you!). Complete with animal to human interaction (I always find such moments intriguing. You pulled it off in writing perfectly. :D), dark and unfriendly conversation, and rising tension that's tense enough to be a drug induced high (no jokes, seriously. I've grown a tolerance to it over time, but you might want to be careful. Others might OD on this epic amount of rawesome. And yes, that's a word.)
I love it when the main protagonist meets someone who's an asshole and does a good job of being one. Though, for some reason, I have my doubts that Amadeo will end up a traitor. Nice name too. Jurgen's statement has me wondering though. "Whore Queen". Perhaps this will be a hint to Gwen's backstory? Only time (and you) will tell.
And the preparations for the battle coming... I've felt this sort of tension before. No, I'm don't just remember it, I remember it by name, even by taste. The stirring in the stomach, the uneasiness in the limbs, the restlessness in the mind... It must be "Sinfulwolf's Plot Build-Up Syndrome"! I experienced it in BoT'D and, like an old friend, comes to greet with a familiar whisper. This can only be a tiding of good things to come.
Anyway, that's all I have. I hope it compensates for my absence and late response. God, I miss reading your work.
Eating ice cream and reading your stories. It just doesn't get any better than this.
DarkX.
Better late than never. Still, welcome back, glad you enjoyed the chapter. More so, I'm glad you find such utter enjoyment out of my writing, that really just means that I've completed my objective of entertaining my readers.
I won't give much away about the characters, however it was Amadeo who said "whore queen", not Jurgen. Perhaps it is a tease, perhaps just an insult. It will perhaps be revealed, or perhaps be left to imagination.
Ah the battle. Considering what I have planned for this particular story, the coming battle won't be too epic in comparison. Expect much more. This story has much more plot to it.
Again, glad you've enjoyed, try and set aside time to enjoy yerself rather than always working.
Believe me, I would love to set aside more time for relaxation, but I don't know if I mentioned that it's the end of my senior year which = CHAOS. You had one, didn't you? It's not easy being in Band, doing senior project, breaking up, joining Facebook...
I mean...
Aw shit, cat's out of the bag. Needless to say, when I first joined it was gaggle of madness. But I appreciate joining now, because I'll be able to keep in touch with my high school friends. Even though I once said it was the devil. Yes, that would be hypocrisy for the win...
Anyway, after June 9, I'm gonna set aside a day for ABSOLUTE LOAF. Just get nothing done. Talk to you, type up Guardian, play videogames... oh it's gonna be loaf. My much needed loaf.
And, quite frankly, I have always enjoyed. I don't think I ever won't. Especially when I combine your literature with ice cream. Seriously, that was rawesome. What makes eating ice cream rawesome for you?
Oh, I forgot to say something about the picture! It's nice, but I don't like the watermark over the woman's face. Your taste in art is just as good as your skill at literature.
DarkX.
I'm not into facebook myself. I don't have a need for it, but I see its uses and while I don't want to get it as I don't need it, I see how its helpful for a lot of folks. My senior year for high school was fairly chaotic, but I was starting to really get into the military, and so I put less effort into school. That said, I had never really planned on getting into post-secondary.
And you broke up? That sucks, my sympathies. Hopefully it wasn't too harsh.
HAve fun after June 9th. I should have the next chapter up before then.
As for ice cream... I dunno. I eat ice cream and watch movies. That's my thing.
I thought the picture fit, I was really focusing on when the snow was falling into Gwenhwyfar's hair and wanted a picture like that, but this was the closest. The watermark is actually someone's name, saying they did the work. It's very faint though and I can't quite make it out.
i like the pics.
Glad you do.
7swords
I like your duo style of story telling, it puts perspective were it ought to be.
sinfulwolf
I like to think so, there's much more going on here than there was in my original story, so I need more characters and perspectives.