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Jackie @sinfulwolf

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zerogeass 2010-10-17 16:12:53

again i am reminded of why your the one of the best authors i know.

truly brilliant chapter as always

sinfulwolf 2010-10-17 16:12:53

Thank ye much. Glad ye enjoyed.

DarkX64 2010-10-21 22:22:35

Argh, was gonna leave a comment on the day you posted, but I ended up forgetting to hit Leave it and closed the tab. Urgh...

I feel stupid for underestimating Andrezj. And he didn't pay up front either, the sly son of bitch. Smart though he was, he did still underestimate his prey. >:-P He and I have a common curiosity: Vampires being helped by the church? And here, I was questioning just how much deeper you could make this...

Rawesome fight scene was indeed rawesome. >:D I would critique and review, but at this point, there's no possible way for me NOT to repeat myself. Besides, it's rawesomeness speaks for itself.

If I have never once before told you that your dialogues scenes like this opening are on another level entirely, let me say it now. I honestly think you have made one of the most exciting and interesting chess scenes in literature ever, you should get a medal! :D

Eagerly looking forward to Chapter 11,

-DarkX.

YOU ARE A CHAMPION!

sinfulwolf 2010-10-21 22:22:35

I hope to make Andrzej an interesting character. Skilled with blade and shrewd in mind. A trickster with morals, but one who is in the end, still very human. Still, his curiosities as well as your own will be explained, even if the Polish hunter does not get the answers as quickly as the reader. More layers have yer to be peeled back to reveal the truths and darkness of this world. Not even Elishka and Gwenhwyfar know everything.

I'm glad you enjoyed the fight sequence. I did try to make it entertaining, and it was the longest on paper, and second biggest in scale so far in the story. More will come, maybe even larger and bloodier. Time will tell.

It's good that you find the dialogue interesting. It is imperative for Salaams character as he is not a protaganist and the reader cannot see his thoughts and emotions quite so clearly. I wanted something calm but also to build on both characters as well as the world around them with simple dialogue rather than throwing chunks of text on the page.

Chapter 11 should come out soonish. Some time shortly after Halloween if not earlier.

zerogeass 2010-10-31 18:41:36

Happy Halloween!

sinfulwolf 2010-10-31 18:41:36

Happy Samhain

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