I enjoy writing, and I enjoy sharing what I have with folks. I suppose that makes me an entertainer of sorts. I hope you can find something of mine that you enjoy and helps pass the time. Leave a comment, or not, the choice is yours.
Age 36, Female
Warrior
In a dark forest
Joined on 12/27/06
I love the ending, such a picture trapped in my head now.
And i'm liking the Brotherhood guys helping out the vampires, makes me wonder whats goin on with Andrezj and his employer.
The little touch on Gwenhwyfar's past and the Christian thing was pretty cool.
The chapter was amazing and theres a pretty awesome picture too.
Worth the wait in every possible way :D
Good, keep that picture for the next chapter.
The Brotherhood and Andrzej may be explained more in the future... or perhaps they'll remain a mystery? Time will tell.
I want to develop and explain Gwenhwyfar more as a character, why she does what she does, what paths she took to lead her on this road. She has a long and colourful history.
Glad you enjoyed the chapter and that it was worth the wait.
DarkX64
Most... chilling... ending...EVER. I got goosebumps. 0_o You can just rock me to sleep tonight...
Andrezj is turning out to be an even smarter character than I took him for originally and I hope he sticks around longer. :)
But the clear highlight of this all is the religion debate between the vampire and priest. So little was said, but such a huge impact was left. Your literary strength continues to amaze and supercede my expectations with each new chapter.
Sorry it's been so long since we spoke, but I'm glad I could break the ice with reminding you how Rawesome your writing talent is. :)
-DarkX.
sinfulwolf
Glad you liked the ending. I hope to use it to slide easily into the next chapter.
Andrzej is a character I like, but that doesn't mean he survives. However, like I said the man is shrewd, and a survivor. I wouldn't expect him to get caught doing something stupid.
The religion debate was interesting. I'm trying not to show Christianity in a negative light in this story, however I'm also not holding it up on a pedestal of glory. It is what it is, and the different aspects of it will show through depending on which character is narrating at that point in time. Alan and Elishka will really only have favorable things to see in Christianity, while Gwenhwyfar is untrusting of the White Christ.
Yeah, it's okay. Real life and such gets in the way. Glad you enjoyed the chapter though.