Damn it Jackie I am so sorry I havent been here to read this sooner.
Life has kept me busy as hell lately with school and friends, hell even now I'm at a friends house on her laptop that I'm supposed to be using to research a project, odds are I'll be here untill morning working on it.
But enough about that, more about your awesome story.
Alan is a badass who obviously dies hard. I can't wait to see what will happen when he wakes up.
And I rather liked your descripition of awesome dragon tatto fucked up eyes guy. Does he get a name?
I loved the toture/ass kicking/ interogation scene with Davide, fucking brutal.
And, awesome picture :D
I can't apologize enough for not getting to this masterpiece sooner. Keep writing it up though.
DarkX64
Epic picture. Need I say more?
Man, you sure did make Alan one hell of a hardy man. How much more can he endure? If he lives to the very end, he will be quite scarred.
I don't how in the world you pulled it off, but that ending stirred up tension in my heart. I can tell this can only get thicker from here and I can't wait to see it.
And you may have lost quite a few readers, but you will never lose me. :) SO long as I live anyway. XD
-DarkX.
sinfulwolf
Heh, I thought the picture was rather fitting for this chapter. It's a good one.
And yes, Alan does endure a lot, but I won't say much more than that.
I tried to make the ending section of the story brutal and harsh. Its part of this world these characters dwell in. Subplots grow thicker, and that will only make the reckoning at the end stronger. Or so I'm aiming for.
Good to know, I'm glad yer enjoying the tale as it flows along.