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Blood of the Damned Part 8

Posted by sinfulwolf - December 3rd, 2009


And here comes Part 8. I'm glad people are enjoying so far. This chapter isn't as long as I had intended, but some answers next installment.
Also, thank you to DarkX64 and zerogeass for saying such good things about me

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Blood of the Damned
Part 8

Jay leaned on Joey, and hobbled into the house. Lila moved ahead with the rifle, cautious in case the farmer was still about. As Lila walked into what appeared to be the living room she noticed the corpse sitting in the chair.

There were two small holes torn into his neck, the skin around them smeared with blood. The man's eyes had rolled back into his skull, and his head was sitting at an unnatural angle; someone had broken his neck.

"What the fuck happened here?" Lila asked as she looked about.

Joey helped Jay down onto the couch before looking at the body.

"What the hell? Did zombies get him?" Joey said, though Jay simply frowned.

Lila leaned forward and examined the wounds on the farmer's neck. They were much too clean to be zombies. Besides, only one bite? That didn't follow their behaviour in the least.

"Hey, have either of you seen a woman before finding me? Black hair, has a sword on her back. Fairly noticeable," Jay asked looking about the room wondering where Haley had gone.

"No. Though she does sound-,"

"Shut up. You guys hear that?" Lila interrupted, stepping away from the farmer's body and looking up.

"Hear what?" Joey asked, though Jay was looking up as well.

Then they all heard it. A slight thump, like someone was walking around on the second floor. Lila moved towards the staircase near the front door, eyes shifting about. She felt her heart pounding in her chest.

The door to the basement opened suddenly. There had been no warning and Lila shrieked as she turned and fired a burst of automatic fire into a woman's chest. Blood sprayed across the wall behind her, but she still stood.

Lila's eyes went wide as she realized her mistake, but before she could shift aim to the zombie's head the woman's hand grasped the barrel of the M4 and easily pulled it from Lila's grasp.

"I just saved you from farmer boy over there. Some more manners would be appreciated," the woman said, as she walked past Lila.

With each second that passed, the wounds closed a little more. Muscle and veins growing and reattaching, before the skin covered up the holes.

"Jesus Christ. I did shoot you out in the forest didn't I," Jay said, staring agape as the holes in Haley's jacket and shirt, revealing pale unblemished skin.

"Yes. Here's your rifle back," Haley said, tossing the weapon she'd taken from Lila to Jay, who caught it and checked to make sure the safety was on.

"What... what are you?" Lila asked staring at the woman whom she should have killed.

"Isn't it obvious! She's a damn vampire. Look at the dead dude's neck. Totally a vampire," Joey pointed out, and Haley smirked, raising an eyebrow.

"No... no that can't be. Vampires aren't real," Lila said, backing away, and Haley could only laugh.

"A decade ago people said the same thing about zombies. Take a look outside. Time to unlearn some of that science crap," Haley said, as she pulled the sword from its sheath on her back.

Lila ran her hands through her dark hair as she tried to register what she'd just been told. She leaned against the wall and looked at the raven haired woman moving up the stairs.

"Where you going now?" Joey asked her.

"Cutting off some loose ends," Haley said as she moved up the stairs to where she knew the farmer's daughter waited.

Next Chapter

Blood of the Damned Part 8


Comments

Aw yeah

Glad your enjoying.

Still entertaining!

huzzah!

so the seceret is revealed!

very good job, but i think Haley would have at least been kncked down after taking a burst from an M4.

but anyways, good job. nice picture too

Went clean through her. So the force didn't push her anywhere.

Mind posting all the chapters together in a news post? Will that even be possible?

Not sure. However, at the top of each chapter there is a link to the table of contents which has links to each chapter for ease of access. When the full thing is complete I may post it all in a single post.

i suppose, she isn't wearing any armor, so nothing would stop the bullets.

but even so, she would have at least felt them, i mean yeah you can't relly kill a vampire, but you can hurt them.....i think

yeah... but people don't necessarily fall because they get shot. The bullet passed through her, so the force of the round would not have pushed her.

Entertaining as usual! The secret came out rather unexpected and not quite as dramatic as I thought it would, but minor things in what has been a very entertaining story so far. I do have a idea what may happen with the girl in the next chapter, but I'll keep the speculation to myself for now.

Yeah. I did put it out there somewhat undramatically, but sometimes things in life just don't happen dramatically. Still, some of the story from this point will be the characters dealing with the development.

As for what you think will happen to the girl, well... ye'll find out soon enough.

weird pic

Indeed. But I like it.

Wow, sorry it took so long to respond, much less read this one. YAY! I GOT MY KUDOS!! But I'm saving them for the end of the review. Nice one again, you really are damn good at standing and delivering. If that Writer's Portal is put up, I hope a publisher looks at your work. It's worthy of some paper. Though I gotta say it was really helter skelter this time around. I had to read it 2-3 times to fully wrap my head around what happened. Doesn't make me think any less of this one. I probably should read the preceding chapters. Pretty soon I'm gonna post again so keep those enchanting eyes peeled (I typed this and thought "Am I hitting on her?...maybe a little. What can I say? Military and in uniform... I kinda dig that ;) LAWL). Keep up the good work!

KUDOS!!!!!!!!!!! OM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOMN OM NOM NOM NOM NOMN ON NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM.....
TASTY!!!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH THEY WERE SOOOOOOOO DELICIOUS WHILE THEY LASTED. but now they're gone...
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

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Till next time,

DarkX.

PS: If overexaggeration annoys you, I'm sorry. I only meant to entertain one of the best authors on NG. And as for the hitting on you part, sorry for that too. If i had that kind of interst in you, it'd be for your creativity and your mind. The body interset would be no more than say, oh 35% maximum, for respect. I give my word for all its worth that I'm not a creep and really do respect your privacy, creativity and anything else you wish I'd back off of. But if you thought of me in that interest, I have to warn that you I'm not that smart, otherwise, I wouldn't have to have written all this. I could have just left out the "enchanting eyes," bit, now, right? ;). Alas. Keep in touch please and thank you. Rock on!

I am very glad you enjoyed the latest chapter, and that you think I have enchanting eyes. I'm actually quite used to being hit on by guys online, comes with the gender, so it doesn't bother me... unless it goes overboard.

Haha, your welcome for the kudos.

Don't worry, I always check in here, so I won't fall out of touch.

^ roflcopters, that is the biggest non-spam comment i have ever seen.

You obviously haven't seen some of my comments on Dashofdaniel's page.

Nice installment! A hope it gets better.

I found it interesting how everyone took Haley's arrival. Lila was shocked as hell, while Joey just knew (I wonder if he reads a lot of Buffy the Vampire Slayer comics?). I also wonder how Haley will react to them later on.

I hope they don't all kill each other, haha... if anyone could even kill Haley, anyways. Hope there's more to come.

Reactions and dealing with the revealing will continue in the next chapters. However I always thought that in zombie/vampire movies, they never really take into account all the people out there that are all over that crap and are actually waiting for these beings to reveal themselves.

As for the killing each other. I dunno. We shall see.

nice story even though i like werewolves better.

werewolves have a special place in my heart as well. I will not be using them in here though. Glad you are enjoying regardless.

i still think that she would have at least FELT the bullets, even if she is imortal-ish vampires can still feel pain.

Who says it didn't hurt. That segment wasn't from her perspective. Just because she didn't react to the pain doesn't mean she didn't feel it. Even normal human beings can do that.
Also... if you look way back in part 4, where she had already gotten shot, she does feel pain.

even so, maybe it's your expirence in the Military, but most people would be freaking out right about then.

Most people is the key word right there. Me and a friend were fighting some guys and he got stabbed in the hip. He didn't realize it until later despite there being blood all down his leg.
Haley has also been fighting undead for five years straight. She's not most people. She's been shot before, hell, she's been shot earlier in this story.
The reaction was different only due to distance between the shooter and her in the two different circumstances. When Jay shot her earlier he was further away so she called out to him. He thought he had missed her so he didn't react other than to say "oh shit sorry" when she called out. When Lila shot Haley it was impossible not to see the blood spray, so Haley reacted to PREVENT GETTING SHOT MORE, as it even said in the story that Lila went to go shoot Haley in the head. That would not have been fun.
As was stated back in chapter 4, Haley does feel pain, she even reacted, but after years of fighting, she's been training her body. Even a normal human body is capable of a great many things (see me example earlier). Imagine what you can do when you are a fictional creature right?
I once saw a man shot through the gut who didn't cry out until we went to do first aid on him.
So... have I answered your question yet? Or do I need more?

General, prob

oh yeah.

I wish you would reply through blog posts instead of using the reply function, it's hard to talk that way...

wow, ya went on a bit of a rage there.

i do belive my qeustion has been answered to the fullest extent, thank you.

Not so much a rage, just making sure that you have the answer, as your obviously did not accept the first three answers. But I'm glad your question has been answered.

If you don't do so we'll probably never talk again unless you post on mine. I'm forgetful...

i hope you know this, i forgot, does the SCAR H fire 9.5 mm bullets? i think it does...

All FN SCAR rifles, the H series included, fire the NATO standard 5.56mm round.

I don't know where you got 9.5mm bullets from.

Well, the premise for the post script was to apologize for A) hitting on you IF that was too much. But it wasn't ;) B) For writing such a ludicrous comment, to which, only about 15% of it said what I originally set out to say. The rest was a writing spasm caused partially due to sugar (yow!) And C) To ask you if I made you smile or, better yet, laugh. Hitting on girls is meaningless unless both of them get a laugh out of it. And, you're a soldier. Hot though women in uniform can be, I'd never want to be face to face with an angry one, even across the interwebs. I'm glad I got to see your response. But after all that drivel of beating around the subject (LORD, I'm a horrible writer) I only want to know one thing: Did my original comment make you smile?

Your loyal and handsome fan,

DarkX.

PS: If you have anything more to say, put my priority question at the bottom of your response. Please and thank you.

PPS: You may already know this, but you rock.

lmmfao (laughing my mother fucking ass off).
Yes indeed, my vocabulary whilst speaking is centered around the word fuck.
However to answer your question, yes your comments made my laugh.

wierd, i don't either, i just thought that the SCAR H fired 9.5 mm slugs.....please correct me if i'm wrong, but it does have a 20 round clip, right?

catch: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/FN_S CAR

The SCAR H has a 20 round magazine yes. The SCAR L has a 30 round magazine.
Here's a tip, if its a western assault rifle, it will more than likely fire 5.56mm rounds.

9.5 slugs just sounds... crap.

.45 slugs is a good round. Before anyone brings up the Desert Eagle, I'd hate to have one of those fuckers. They suck unless your shooting at one thing... and your aim isn't off.

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