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Blood of the Damned part 14

Posted by sinfulwolf - January 10th, 2010


Creatures emerge from the darkness, John is closer to his goal, and hope is fading fast for the survivors. What does fate hold in store for those left standing?

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Blood of the Damned
Part 14

A chain link fence topped with razor wire sprouted from the ground before John. Signs of red with the words "Private Government Property, No Trespassing," scrawled in white block letters. John turned his head, where a paltry dirt road that was little more than two tire ruts in the ground, led through a gate and into the small piece of so called private property. Within was a single story stone bunker and a shack presumably for guards.

No one was about, save the dead. A few soldiers whose heads were burst open lay across the ground. A jeep had crashed into the shack, the driver's head smashed open against the steering wheel. The gate was smashed open, laying on the ground allowing John to step into the compound.

John's eyes took in the dead soldiers, saddened that they could not be given the gift. Still, he could not dwell on their loss. Their time was over and his own was just beginning. Within this bunker was the answers he craved. His true journey would soon begin.

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Jay watched the smile melt from Haley's face, and felt his gut clench in fear. The vampire started to raise her M4, to her shoulder, shutting one eye to try and take aim at something.

"Behind Haley now," Jay called to Joey and Lila as he turned to walk backwards with his heavy limp, dropping his walking stick. Something was very wrong.

A loud hiss sounded from nearby, but Jay couldn't place it. Haley though stayed still trying to find the target, using her nose and eyes.

"What it is?" Lila demanded.

"Damien... another vampire... once," Haley informed them.

"Once?" Jay asked, before a creature burst from no where, jumping high in the air.

It was humanoid, but its skin was a mottled brown, with yellow cat like eyes. Once long dark hair was straggly and mostly falling out leaving only a few wisps on its torn scalp. Its nose had fallen away leaving an ugly rotten hole in its wake. Its mouth yawned open wide like a snake, twin fangs protruding out in a flesh rending snarl.

"What the fuck?" Joey yelled out as the thing landed on the ground not far from him, placing the human between itself and Haley.

Joey started walking back slowly, lifting his pistol, hands shaking.

"Get out of the fucking way," Haley yelled, but Joey wasn't listening and she started to move, but the creature circled around to keep out of Haley sights.

Jay lifted his carbine and fired a few shots at the vampiric creature, a few of his shots bursting through its head, a mist of gray and pink spraying out the other side, but Damien only growled as the holes in skull and skin started to grow over.

Joey looked about to say something, before the demon like monstrosity jumped forward and its fangs sank deep into Joey's neck. A scream tore through the night air as blood spurted out from the gashes rent in Joey's neck. Haley swore and dropped her carbine and grabbed her sword, pulling it free from its sheath.

Damien looked up at her, still cradling the blood soaked Joey in its clawed hands while Haley felt a pain in her gums as her fangs extended even further. Hissing in anger and rushed forward and started to swing a kick at the creature's head.

Damien raised his hand to block the kick, but Haley had anticipated the move and instead of her foot, her blade made contact with flesh. A monstrous hand sailed through the air, blood spurting from severed arteries, and Damien howled, before Haley's boot crunched against his face, sending him sprawling across the ground.

Strolling over to Damien who was crawling on all threes to where his severed hand had landed in the grass. As Haley approached he turned his twisted features up towards her and snarled, swiping at her thigh and cutting through her cargo pants and flesh. As blood poured down her leg and soaked into her clothing, Haley returned the vicious snarl and brought her sword down on Damien's forearm. The limb fell away from the elbow, spewing more infected vampire blood across the ground. Haley hastily kicked the arm away before slashing out with her sword. Damien, still scrambling on the ground on stumps, had his throat split open. A silent howl went into the air as blood bubbled out from the second mouth in his throat, more crimson spilling over his chin.

Haley's foot pinned her former friend to the ground. She tried to think of something to say, something to help pass her friend off to the next life, but she quickly realized Damien was already dead. This was to be a gift to him.

The sword descended, tip plunging through rib and heart. Damien's eyes bulged for a moment, before gently closing as his body settled into death. Haley shook her head softly, and twisted her sword, tearing the heart further, before pulling her sword free and bringing it down on Damien's neck, severing his head.

She kicked it away and knelt by the body, overlooking it. Damien was topless, his torso covered in scratches and bite marks; chunks of flesh missing and exposing bone and organ underneath. The zombies had swarmed him, had infected him. That's why he was like this. His pants though, they were military.

With a frown she began to search his pockets, eventually finding a sheet of paper. She pulled it out and unfolded it. Much of it was spattered in blood, but it appeared to be a note he wrote shortly after initial infection, but before turning.

As her eyes ran across the words on the note, Jay stood over Lila and Joey. Lila was desperately trying to save Joey's life, shoving strips of cloth into the wound and wiping away blood.

"Enough," Jay said to her, and Lila looked up at the soldier.

She relented, and nodded softly, standing up, and tossing away the bloodied bandages she had used on Joey. Blood didn't spurt from the wound as his heart slowed to a crawl, death looming over him. Jay kneeled down and picked up the pistol, quickly checking to make sure a round was chambered. One was.

Aiming the pistol between Joey's eyes, Jay's finger settled on the trigger. He felt like the Grim Reaper was standing over his shoulder, scythe ready to cleave into Joey's soul and drag it away. Or perhaps it was already gone. Blood vessels were popping in Joey's eyes as the infection ran rampant through his body, and the white of his eyes disappeared beneath a haze of red.

Before the creature that was once Joey could even react, Jay fired.

Even Haley looked up from her note.

Next Chapter

Blood of the Damned part 14


Comments

Zombie vampire... very intresting... in a good way.

I've been waiting ten chapters to use the zombie vampire.

why make zombievampires?

because I could.

........awesome

Glad you enjoyed.

Jeez. I can't hold the story line for long. I usually get bored and can't finish a story and leave it incomplete. You ARE the excellent writer; I'm just a child putting sentences together compared to you...

Ah well. I don't claim to be a horrible writer, but I don't think I make you look childish. I am glad you like my writing though.

everything you write is deep and awsome, if this was 5/5 i'd give it a 10! <(^u^)>

lol. Well thank you very much good sir. I am glad you enjoy.

Well! I was gonna be disappointed... and then an INFECTED VAMPIRE shows up. Now that's crazy! And that's all I've got to say! So much to see in the world, so little time...

Fight scene was nice, with complimentary Metal Gear Solid tunes running through my head all the while. But some words were messed up (I'm sure you know which ones are screwy. Just give a second look). Still good as usual.

I only made the "disappointed," remark because I was hoping for a showdown between Haley and John. But he's busy finding out about himself and she's fighting her own personal demons. Alas. No doubt they'll clash soon. And, now, I actually think that Haley wouldn't stood a chance. At least not at this point. Sort of like, not till it was meant to happen. I'm sure that's your reason for holding out on me, if no one else. Like they say, "The best is yet to come!"

ARRRRRRRGH! Man, I wish John would move faster and find out about himself! It truthfully is starting to get to me, not knowing what his story is. At least, this is a premonition to juicier things. It's just the waiting that's killing me... (better than the zombies killing me I suooise. Lol)

And Joey's dead... that's a shame. Oh well. Shit happens.

All in all, yet another good installment. The tension for the next one is building up...

THAT PICTURE JUST MOVED!!!!!!! (scrolled down the page to avoid looking at it for too long)

DarkX.

Well I don't want the big boss man to either die, or kill the main characters just yet. This isn't a video game where folks can clash with shooting guns and swinging swords and the villain will jump away with not a scratch despite the fact you wailed on him like a hundred times. So if John and Haley had fought, someone would have been killed, and that kind of kills off later chapters. So not as much, "best is yet to come" but more, I want my villain (or my hero) alive to finish the story.

Glad you liked the fight scene. I'll have to look over it again though to check for some of them words that would be screwy.

As for John's background, people have been waiting so long I'm worried that it won't be good enough. I've kept his origins in the dark because I've heard that not knowing much of the villain makes him more interesting. Unfortunately all this build up to what he is may cause disappointment when he is finally revealed. I did leave some clues behind in this chapter though. You also didn't mention anything about Damien's note.

Yep, Joey's dead. It seems like you didn't like him very much.

Ah yes, the note. Well, it wasn't that I didn't notice it so much as I didn't attach gravity to it. Unless you pull another "John," on us (heh heh, see what I did there? :P) I'm sure we'll find out about it's contents next chapter.

Speaking of, if John's a worry to you, just spend more time on his story. You said you had plans on closing the series pretty soon, so it's not like you got forever to tell us about him. Not if you want to close the series properly, anyway. My advice to your fear of ruining his image is to make hist story as fucked up as possible. No, I don't mean make it crappy, I mean MAKE IT SOME SERIOUSLY CRAZY ASS, SCARY AS FUCK, MIND-BENDINGLY DEMENTED SHIT. I believe I speak for everyone when I say that the more fucked up they are, the more villains are loved/respected. And if you don't believe me, just look up Pyramid Head, perhaps the most fucked up, yet respected villain of all time. Now, I'm not telling you to model John after him, but rather, make him fucked up YOUR style. Plunge to your deepest depths of the horror you could ever possibly associate with psychos and sociopaths. Make him one crazy son of a bitch!

Just remember, that's my advice, not a necessary requirement. I just think that will help is all.

And as for Joey...Well I did like the humor he offered when he was alive. So, yeah, I'll miss him slightly. But only that much. I would of been a lot more torn if Lila or Jay died. I'm not worried about Haley and making John die this early would be stupid. And your smart. That won't happen, if it does...yet.
As for their inevitable encounter... that should be interesting.

That picture is STILL SCARING ME!!! CUT IT OUT!!!!

DarkX

Completely fucked up. I'll try, and see what comes out the other end, but like I said, I've already had him planned out since chapter 4, since before I introduced him. We shall see what occurs though.

Joey... yeah Joey was kind of my comic relief in a way. Not why he was killed though.

Lol. I'm almost happy that picture is getting to you. Means I chose well.

scary, but im a big boy, ill live. Its very good but i think its missing exclamation marks but thats not the point, its very imaginable and your series have always made me chill but i hope you will continue writing stories. Because they are great!

-star-

I'm not a fan of exclamation marks. I occasionally use them in dialogue to add emphasis on yelling, but not very often.
Glad you are enjoying, and glad you find some chills in my words. I will continue to be writing more after this one is done.

...mum?

perhaps.

damn I thought the solider would die before joey would and jay killed him. Man that's actually a disappointment. Oh well should of got out of the way.

You don't like the soldier?

Slaanesh... feels good man.

Indeed.

Hydrogen Peroxide... Feels good man.

I'll take yer word on that one.

all right, i got me some free time.

time to write, and stop playing Modern Warfare 2

Yeah... ye're falling behind.

ok, about 2/3 of the way done.

expect either tommorow or the day after.

Well, you've got yourself a deadline now.

Feels good man... feels good man.

So does an adrenaline rush.

well, very little done today, a friend of mine was kinda having a total meltdown.

i got about a half hour, lets see what i can do

A fair bit can get done in half an hour. Especially if the story "runs away on you".

wrapping up the chapter.

you mind if i steal your idea of a table of contents page?

not really.

to bad i already did

eh, just a way to organize is all it is.

Awesome story. Very good combination.

Thank you very much. I'm glad you like.

hey sin. Since you are such a great inspirator and writer i decided to make a test run of a potential series. Do you mind giving me some feedback?

Not at all. Please do realize though that I can be rather frank with feedback, as it's the best way to improve.

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