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Blood of the Damned part 18

Posted by sinfulwolf - February 7th, 2010


The end looms ever closer, as parties finally begin to clash. Blood will be spill, and lives will be shattered, but who will ultimately claim victory when the dust settles?
In other news, the "Story Archive" page has been put up. You can get to it through the Table of Contents for Blood of the Damned. Don't forget to comment on the Story Archive to get a PM about War of the Damned, which is coming closer and closer.
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Blood of the Damned
Part 18

The muzzle flashes lit the darkness for a split second, just long enough for Lila and Jay to see the creatures coming towards them, reaching out with rotting hands to consume them. Haley stood with glow stick held high, and sword flashed, taking heads from necks, keeping her lips clamped shut as blood sprayed across her face.

As they fought desperately against the encroaching ghouls, happy for the narrow corridors that kept the undead coming towards them in a narrow funnel, Haley felt the pangs of hunger in her gut. She hadn't eaten since the night prior, where she had gorged on the farmer. Regardless, she hadn't exactly been keeping a low profile that would have let her go a few days without food.

Hell, the Elder Coven supposedly ate once every few months.

Letting out a snarl, before forcing her mouth closed once again, Haley's sword cut through a zombie's arm before biting into the creature's neck and splitting through the spine. Walking backwards, she had to be careful where she placed her feet as she began to move over the corpses that Lila and Jay left in their wake.

"Reloading... I'm running real fucking low here," Jay called out, just a hint of panic in his voice. He was damn good at hiding his fear, but Haley could almost smell it on him. Still he pressed on after pushing one of his last magazines into his M4 carbine.

"I'm out!" Lila nearly screamed as she looked at her pistol.

"Use it as a club, it's our only fucking chance," Jay yelled.

"They're getti-" Lila started, but was suddenly cut off.

Haley risked a glance over her shoulder to see Lila's legs kicking in the air as she was pulled into a room beside them. Grabbing Jay's shoulder she gently nudged him towards the door to help her, while she covered his back.

A single gunshot sounded behind her as she moved in through the door, her sword slashing out to behead another zombie before she reached out and hit the button that slid the door shut. As the metal came out from the wall, it crushed a outreaching arm, severing the limb. No scream of agony came from the wounded undead, another reminder of their loss of humanity.

Safe for a moment, Haley turned to see Jay helping Lila to her feet. Tears of fear streaked down her face; she had come so very close to death. Or even worse a shambling undeath. As the two humans embraced, Haley once again reflected on her own state of being. She was so close to being one of those monsters outside that were pounding on the door. Her lungs no longer drew breath, but her heart still beat within her breast. That was what set her apart, what made her, despite not being alive, still human; in a sense at least.

"Is she bitten?" Haley asked.

"No," Lila answered for herself, and Haley nodded.

She turned back to look at the window that looked out into the hall to see the gathering of ghouls that awaited them. Standing just before the shatter proof glass however was a much larger creature.

He wore the same military pants and dog tags as the other talking zombie they had killed, but this one's fingers stretched out into vicious claws, and fangs pushed down on his lips. Yellow eyes stared in through the window, and he shook his head, almost in sorrow.

"What the fuck is that?" Lila asked, separating from Jay and spotting the creature.

"I think it's another of those alphas you girls were looking up," Jay said.

"Alpha... you impure humans always try so hard to label everything, to explain everything with your science. I am John," the creature said, and though his voice was muffled almost to the point of being inaudible through the glass, all three could hear his words clearly in their minds.

Before either of them could react, John's hands curled into tight fists, and pounded against the glass. Cracks spread from the impact like a spider web. Lila jumped back against the other wall, crashing against an empty shelf.

John smiled as he looked at the cracks, and in the silence, the banks of computers lining the walls hummed. Haley clutched her sword tighter, already pale knuckles turning white. Jay let out a slow breath and checked his weapon.

"Lila, take this," Haley said, tossing her the M4 she'd had slung across her back. Lila caught it while Haley handed out the few magazines she had left to her the two she had brought under her protection.

The first collided against the glass again, the cracks getting wider, spreading further. All three hearts pounded like drums, and Haley felt fear. It was an alien feeling, more akin to the woman she had left behind on that rooftop in London five years ago. She closed her eyes and drew in a deep breath. She needed to be calm, fighting whilst frightened led to mistakes. Mistakes down here in the darkness would lead to death, and Jay's and Lila's demise.

Another crack against the glass, chips of glass falling to the floor. It was only a matter of time now.

A fourth punch, and John's fist went clear through the glass, making a jagged hole. As his hand pulled free Jay fired a few shots through the hole, the bullets tearing through John's stomach and spraying blood out behind him.

John cocked a brow, an expression that looked so strange and horrific with the eyebrow missing and the skin where it had been rotted away. The creature looked down to his stomach, where the skin began to reknit itself, leaving in its wake ragged scars. John couldn't heal as well as a vampire, but he had somehow brought himself closer to the same bloodline that birthed him.

"What the fuck are you?" Jay yelled as John began to pull at the hole in the window, the glass groaning as it strained to keep in place.

"I am the future, and I will give you the gift to join me there," John said, as the window finally came crashing down, and the zombies waiting beside the Alpha came shambling in as two carbines began to fire.

"And you fallen angel, will be sent back to Hell," John told Haley.

Next Chapter

Blood of the Damned part 18


Comments

this story amazes me more as the chapters go on.

I'm glad you enjoy it so. I do try to entertain.

freakin baddass, AGAIN.

you are making this so awesome.

i need to finish mine.

still good job as always, can't wait for the fight.

Heh, I do try. I was originally gonna have Haley say some cheesy one liner at the end, but I found it took away too much from the content already presented.
Glad yer enjoying zero, the fight is obviously next chapter.

youll never change.

How will I never change?

still with your story and scary ass pics but your still awsome!!!also sorry for calling you a hoe.

I'm really enjoying writing this story and the pictures fit I think. It's okay, I forgive you.

Nice...

Glad you like.

Normally, I would have a lot to say... but I'm just amazed to still have a face, this was SO INTENSE. BEST ONE YET!

CRAP!!! THE INTENSITY OF THIS PICTURE HAS DESTROYED MY CAPS LOCK KEY!!! AND TEH EPICNESS OF TEH PIKTURR HAVE DEESTROYED MY ENGLISHES. WAT SHUD I DU BUT BECAUSE AW CRAP IT WAS ZOMGIES HOLY CRAP, THIS ROCKED!!!

SUMTHING LIKE THAT...
UHHHH..
GOOD, MOAR PLZ!!!!
MOAR!!!

WHAT A MONOLOGUE EH?!?!?! HOW'S THAT FOR SPAM-LESS SPAM?

DARK X.

Wow, I don't think I've ever seen you write like that, so this must be a pretty decent entry. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Whew! I was actually kinda scared you would delete it under the idea that it was spam! Glad you didn't. I wrote like that because I honestly thought it WAS rip-your-face-off-INTENSE (Multiple entendre!). I originally intended to make my comment short because this installment was short and damn awesome. Maybe your best yet. But then, my comment got out of hand and went into a whole mind-destroying shpeel. And it ended up that I hoped you would have perceived it as funny. I know that your response was pretty damn funny, considering how shocked you made yourself sound. I just hope that this doesn't make you think less of me and that it got a smile out of you.

But I can't help it. I want MOAR!!!!!!!!

MOAR

DarkX

Yes well ye did get a smile out of me. I'm glad others are enjoying reading this as much as I enjoy writing it.

More will come.

hmmm, have you ever thought of animating this into Flash form?

it would be very kickass

I've thought about it, but alas I not only don't have flash, I have zero skills with flash, and in the end, it would be crap if I made it.

But it is worthy of animation. So, she shouldn't do anything to the animation end at all, not if she can't. Instead, wait for the Writers Portal. It's bound to get front page. When it does, a good animator will notice and request to be the proud animator of the series. Approval will be given at her discretion and a legend will be born. I'm confident of this plan's success because:

A) Unless someone gives me a link or a book that 1-ups this, THIS REALLY IS THE BEST LITERATURE I HAVE READ PERTAINING TO ZOMBIE APOCALYPSES. Publications and cinema is what deserves. No joke.

B) There are expert animators on this site. Someone good enough to live up to the standards that Sin has set will come along and ask. When they do, all this will be given life.

C) And I'm willing to lend my voice for the voice acting. I'd be willing to do Joey or John. John preferably. Jay... I'm not sure if I can quite match what I hear in my head when I read Jay's lines. I think there might be someone more suited to his part.

Jsut you wait Sin. The requests will come in by the truckloads. ;)
I know that if I was an animator, I would ask.

Waiting for that day to come,

DarkX.

I'm also waiting for MOAR!!!!!!!!

I wouldn't mind seeing it animated either. It could be quite interesting in a good animators hands. Now, as vain as I can be about my writing, I'm not going to say it will happen because most of the best animators already have their hands full with their own stories they want to tell, and with their own lives.

Also, batting away my own vanity for once, I do think this story is good. The best literature going to zombie apocalypses. No, I'd give that to Max Brook's "World War Z" (http://www.randomhouse.com/crown /worldwarz/index2.php) which is the best zombie story I've ever read. It was simply amazing. The Battle of Yokers was terrifying and awesome at the same time.

Voice acting is not my call at all, more the animator and how he sees it. I myself would just be helping with the script, should such a day arrive.

I'm not holding my breath, and you shouldn't either.

In the meantime, I still have to finish Blood of the Damned, and then work on War of the Damned, which I'm actually quite excited for and have been gathering pictures.

yeah, maybe you could get someone else to do it for you.

i would love to help, but i have nothing in the means of animation or audio.

but i'd love to see this animated or perhaps some Art of it or something.

Animation would be nice, but since I can't work on it due to lack of programs/skills, I'm not demanding anything of it. Rather, I'll work on my writing.

As for art, I may or may not put up some rough sketches. Nothing to get me in the art portal as I'm not that good a drawer, but something just for reference.

OH YEAH I ALMOST FORGOT!

BIOSHOCK 2 CAME OUT TODAY!

but i can't get it cause life's just not awesome like that.

Meh, I never got into Bioshock. Dante's Inferno however also came out today, which I've spent most of the day playing. I love it.

it did?

damn, i forgot about that one too.

tell me if i have this right

In Dante's Inferno, your in Hell and you run around and kill tons of demons to save your wife? Only alot more badass.

Dante's Inferno is a reinterpretation of one specific section of Dante's Divine Comedy. In this interpretation you, Dante, a Crusader knight decide to go to the depths of hell to save your wife who was taken due to a wager she made with Lucifer. In order to get to hell you kill Death, and take his scythe, then begin to traverse the 9 circles of hell.

interesting.

In a good way?

interesting.

It sounds almost kinda sweet, going through hell to save your wife.

Reminds me of Dead Space.

Yes... but mostly a huge resounding no. Dead Space is scary, Dante's Inferno is not.

the story and your profile.i think that since your in the army you may put your experiences or what you may have felt during your time in the war.

I do try a little bit. It's not very noticeable in this particular story though.

to be honest Dead Space is one of the more sweet games i've played, Issac is looking for his wife after all.

Eh, Dead Space seems pretty good so far, but it has little to do with Issac searching for his wife.

it will later, right now Hammond is probaly telling you to fix the ship or something

No... I meant my enjoyment of the game has little to do with Isaac looking for his wife.

well yeah, it's blowing some arms off those motherfucking Necromorphs.

but when i played it and i fought all these things i was thinking, "Wow, Isaac really loves this chick."

I haven't gotten that far yet... like I said, other games.

Hmmm, so John can renew flesh, too? What exactly makes them do that? An increase in platelets? Or, is it magic? I would like to know.

I like how John speaks. He sounds like something right out of Paradise Lost. It amazes me.

Can't wait for the climatic battle. Hope it's good.

I haven't revealed everything about the vampires yet, but John's increased vampire genetics is why he can regenerate.
I take a lot of time thinking of John's dialogue. He's a bugger.
It should come soon. Early next week.

yeah i know, but when you play it, just think in the back of your mind. "This guys doing it for his wife."

Okay then.

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