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Blood of the Damned Pt 2

Posted by sinfulwolf - September 30th, 2009


Very late I'm aware, but here is part 2 of my zombie/vampire story. I do hope you all enjoy.

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Blood of the Damned

Part 2

5 Years Later

Joey MacPherson ran amongst the throngs of people through the streets of the city. In the skies above helicopters swerved between the buildings, their spotlights probing through the night. Screams filled the air, as the infected emerged from buildings to attack. There was nothing but chaos, and the military had no chance here of telling zombie from friendly.

Joe felt the terror grip his mind as he made his way through the crowds, elbowing and shoving to get to Crispin Bay Harbour, where rumour said the military were evacuating citizens of Brock Island.

In between the gridlocked streets, past burning cars, and bodies left to rot. The panic of the mob filled him, the hurry to get to safety pushed him onwards. He climbed over vehicles, pushed a woman carrying a child to the ground and forgot her.

The sound of a boat's air horn filled the air. Just down the street Joey could see the searchlights the military had put in place near the entrance. Barbed wire now lined the fences and armed soldiers stood near the gates.

The air horn was that of the last boat in the harbour, and it was pulling out.

"No!" Joey screamed, forcing himself past people that were no longer moving, through the throng that had been put to a stand still.

As he got closer to the harbour gates, Joe saw the throng thinning into three lines, each passing through a smaller gate the military had thrown together. Doctors and military medics were examining each person to go through, and for some it was taking awhile. Joey was impatient, that last boat was leaving, but he'd still be able to swim to it.

As he pushed his way towards the front of the line, screams erupted all around him, and groans of hunger. The infected were in the mob now, and the military immediately closed off their gates. The doctors ran to the comparable safety of the harbour's interior whilst the medics strung more razor wire across the entrances. Soldiers raised their M4 carbines towards the crowd, flicking off their safeties.

"Let us through, we're still alive," someone yelled, before a rock was thrown, smashing a soldier's helmeted head.

The man staggered, but quickly righted himself again. Searchlights aimed towards the crowd, as helicopters came down, picking up doctors and soldiers. The men on the gate were starting to look nervous as the crowd got angrier, and the infected moved amongst them.

The tide broke when an infected woman jumped at the gates, and a soldier let a burst of automatic rifle fire into her face. Blood spattered across the front row of the crowd, and the screams got louder. Panic set in fully and the harbour barricades were charged.

The soldiers opened fire without discrimination. Infected and human alike were shot down, their blood spattering across the street. Joe's eyes went wide and he turned, and started to run back into the city.

One of the helicopters above opened fire, the heavy machine guns tearing the figures below to pieces. Joe could only hope to make it to some sort of haven.

An infected jumped in front of him, his instinct kicked in and Joey punched the zombie in the face. He could feel its nose break, saw its head kick back... but it didn't go down. It lunged, tackling Joe to the ground. It snarled once, and dipped its head to bite into his neck.

Instead of the pain of his flesh being torn away, Joe instead heard the sound of metal connecting with bone, even over the gunshots. The infected fell off Joe, and the sound emanated twice more from beside him. Joe turned his head to see a lead pipe resting on the ground beside the zombie's busted skull, bits of brain spattered on the concrete, tufts of hair stuck to the metal of the pipe.

"Hey, get up, we have to get the fuck out of here," came a woman's voice.

Looking up Joe saw a young woman in jeans and a t-shirt standing above him, holding out her slim hand. Joe blinked as he took in the sight, before grasping her hand and getting to his feet.

"Where to?" he asked, looking around.

"The outskirts, the edges of the island. Our best chance is to find a private boat somewhere," she said, and started jogging towards an alley.

Joe looked back at the harbour, where the infected where running amok, pulling soldiers from their towers and tearing into them without mercy. He shuddered and followed the strange woman.

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Haley let the body go, and looked out from the bedroom window of the house she'd broken into. Her tongue flicked across her lips, getting some of the blood smeared there from her meal.

The harbour had fallen, the survivors of the infection would scatter across the island now. Oddly enough, she would become their final hope soon enough.

Next Chapter

Blood of the Damned Pt 2


Comments

incredible i cant wait to read more

Thank you much. Hopefully it won't be as long.

Nice pic to go with the story. You're a damn good writer!

Thank you very much, and I've been trying to find good pictures to go along with the various chapters.

amazing simply amazing i love it and cant wait for part three

Wow... thank you very much. I hope to have part 3 done soon.

Once again, very nice.

Thank ye. More should come soon.

lol, I'm not a reader at all, but I liked your work here. The pic is awesome as well. :3

Thank you very very much. A non-reader taking the time to read my stuff is the ultimate compliment. I'm also glad you liked the picture. I thought it worked well with this chapter.

Good to see you back from your Canadain military duty if I remember correctly. Long time since newspost 61. I didn't know you were back until I saw your comment in kittykillsalot's newspost. Interesting zombie story, you wrote. I'm usually not the survival stories type, I'm more adventurer. I'm still intrigued. The tale is starting picking up on it's exciting parts.

I know what's happening Haley is now a vampire because of the pale lady stranger in your first part. Joey and a young woman are searching for escape. I wouldn't mind you explaining some things in the next chapter but I suggest you would put some suspense in finding some facts by the characters. It's your story and I'm only putting a suggestion.

Suitable picture for your story even though they're not fighting mobs of inflected yet.

Thank you for the welcome back, and thank you for the comment. I'm glad you're liking something that generally isn't your style.

As for revealing facts... the next chapter I just decided to get some chronological issues out of the way.

Seriously, Thats some good shit. In most zombie movies soldiers get there asses kicked... i hate that you have the balance right. i hope to read more ;) i salute you lol

I myself am I soldier so I tend to... favour them more I suppose you could say. Regardless, I'm just trying to make a good story, and I'm glad you are enjoying in so far.

Im hoping to join the army Myself, Next year :D should be fun

It's... an interesting experience. But well worth it.

A nice follow-up to the previous story.Very descriptive,and I thought that you accurately depicted a virus,ravaged city (what with all the self-reliance and selfishness).Definitely helped me visualize the scene.

Found a few errors,but fewer than last time.

Later in story,I hope you explain some things about what's happening,or what caused this to happen.I know you couldn't explain it now (what with all the frenzied zombie hordes invading,and what not),but later,I hope you answer some of these questions I have.How did this zombie infection get created?How was it released?What's Joe's background?How did he hear about the rumor that military were going to be at the harbor?Who's Haley?What's her relation to the story?I couldn't possibly ask you to answer all of these in one episode,but I hope you get around to it.And I also hope you'll continue this series :)

I do plan on continuing the story, and I do hope to answer all yer questions. Though maybe not all. A little bit of mystery is good.

However, I'm glad you've enjoyed it thus far.

:D :D

Best of luck to you in yer adventure!

zombies + guns + more zombies + exelent way of words = awsomeness
nice work!

Don't be forgetting vampires :P

But thank you. I'll be sure to let you know when chapter 3 is up.

Sorry, but I'm not feeling it, "misinformed my post" ignorant. After you started to sound worse than Alex Jones, I lost taste of this story as a result of you not thinking why nor you looked it up on the internet, so do some research, fuck wad, you pissed me off calling me an anarchist like if you were FUCKING ALEX JONES, he got censored for too much nonsense, which is what you DID, saying too much thoughtless nonsense so I'm gonna censore you too for being thoughtless of my post, so keep your thoughtlessness to yourself and get the FUCK OFF MY PROFILE, because destruction was like first thing that came into your mind.

I'd uh, rather keep this conversation where it belongs rather than on my profile, where I have a story rather than a debate. If you want to debate, keep it there and we can yell at each other as much as we feel like. However, please don't spread it elsewhere. I do not think its necessary here.

However, censorship seems somewhat against your views, and its generally not good for society. Did you not read Fahrenheit 451? Please not respond here unless its actually about the story above. Want to yell at me? Send a PM.

Thank you.

epic, kicks the shit out my story, sounds like somthing my friend Steves would make, very interesting.

I'm glad you liked it. As for kicking the shit out of your story, at least yours is a fairly original idea. Wheras, as has been pointed out to me, mine isn't. Not really.

Still, even unoriginal ideas can be good stories. I learned that from Stephen King... well not directly.

oh yes forgot wonderful picture and good job on the first story, i think i'll post my story now.

Yeah I thought the picture went well with the story, even though its Left 4 Dead. It works. And glad you liked the first bit.

wow cool looking hoping to see it ^-^

Glad you are!

when will there be a number 3? also i recently found another vampire story "Cirque du freak" you should read it, manga versions better than the book, also i'm writting a new story.

If all goes well, this weekend.
Cirque de Freak eh? I'll keep an eye out for it. Did you say it was a manga?
New story? I'll swoop by to check it out.

Wanted to say Ty for commenting on me, I'm glad I wasn't just trolled to death on such a serious matter.

You're welcome.

good story cant wait for blood of the dammed part 3

Hopefully if the words come it'll be posted this weekend.