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Blood of the Damned Finale

Posted by sinfulwolf - February 22nd, 2010


And so we come to the end of this tale. I hope you all have enjoyed the read as much as I enjoyed the writing of it. If you want to be notified about when the prequel comes out, be sure to comment on the Story Archive thread, accessed through the table of contents of this here story. Again, I hope you enjoyed this, and hopefully the next story comes out soon.

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Blood of the Damned
Part 20

Jay laid on his back, relaxing in the comfort of the bed. Another farmhouse, another dawn. After only a few days and nights they were already used to travelling under the shroud of nightfall, and taking their rest during the day.

Lila pulled the bandages off Jay's stump, and used a clean cloth soaked in water and vodka to clean off the wound once again. She had been unable to find any proper medicine and so the booze would have to do to kill any possible infection.

"How's it looking?" Jay asked weakly, he didn't seem to have much strength left anymore, and Lila couldn't really blame him. He had been through so much, and the loss of a leg was a traumatizing event.

Cauterizing it with a frying pan had not been a pleasant experience either.

"No signs of infection. It looks as clean as I can get it," Lila said, dunking the cloth in a bowl of water beside her, turning the liquid a light pink from the blood.

"Good... I think I'm just going to rest awhile... wake me up for my shift," he said, and laid his head back on the pillow, almost immediately falling asleep.

Lila didn't say anything, but simply reapplied the bandages and looked back to the door, barricaded by the dresser that had been sitting in here. She took a quick peek out the solitary window and squinted against the morning sun. No zombies, no vampires. Just nothing.

She sat herself down and leaned against the wall, holding a sawed off shotgun in her lap. They had found the weapon downstairs in the hands of a man who had apparently taken his own head off. A bite mark had been visible on his upper arm. She only had a few shells tucked away in her pocket. She prayed to whoever might be listening that it would see them through to the end.

Setting her head against the wall, she let her eyes flutter closed, and sleep overtook her.

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The moon looked down upon them as they walked together from the farmhouse and towards cottage country. Their arms wrapped around the other's shoulder to help Jay stay on his solitary foot. Lila's spare arm held the shotgun, Jay's a walking stick.

They didn't talk, wanting to keep as low a profile as possible.

For hours they walked, eventually coming upon carefully trimmed grass and perfectly planted trees. Cottages hidden within the shade leered at them, daring them to explore. Both ignored the temptation to find another place to rest, fearful of the death that could be lurking within, and simply walked along the road, not finding the strength to care anymore if a zombie found them.

They passed a tree, someone hanging from the low hanging branches. Either the birds of the undead had gotten to the ragged remains slowly shifting in the breeze. Neither could even identify gender, or age. They simply pressed on.

A few more hours slowly rolled by, until they found themselves coming to a large waterfront home, behind it a large dock and a boathouse. Out on the water, anchored off the shore, was a large sailboat, shadowy figures moving about onboard.

The two exchanged glances, not daring to hope, but moved down to the dock anyway, hoping to find some way to call out or to get out there. They moved past the boathouse without checking it, and as soon as their feet hit the planks of the dock they heard something shift behind them.

They turned, to see Haley sitting on a barrel that had been hidden from their view. She wore a wry and tired smile on her features, fangs hidden beneath her lips.

"We were waiting," she said getting to her feet, and striking a flare.

As the bright green light flared to life, Lila frowned.

"Where the fuck have you been?" she demanded.

"Clearing a path. Securing a way off this island for you two," she said, as shouted started to come out over the water, a small rowboat starting to make its way to land.

Jay almost laughed, but simply pulled himself out of Lila's helping hands and sat himself on the edge of the dock and looked out towards salvation, and waited. Lila flicked her gaze between vampire, human and the ship coming towards them, wondering if it was more of Haley's kind, or more of hers.

"Thank you," she said simply, sitting beside Jay on the dock.

Haley held the flare high for a few moments, before tossing it into the water.

"I hope they hurry," she said dryly under her breath.

On the horizon, behind the ship, the glow of a new dawn started to light the sky.

The End

Blood of the Damned Finale


Comments

The only thing that mars this ending is the fact that it's sunrise and Haley's a vampire. But the ride has ended. The struggle is over. And even though I never commented on the previous chapters, this was a ride I enjoyed from start to finish. Because I did read it all. Enjoyed it all. Remembered it all. And there's no way I'll forget this. It's been a hell of a ride. Nice riding with ya.

Thanks for the grade A read,

DarkX.

PS: Did you get my last comment on the semi final installment? I left a comment that was unanswered. When you reply to this (and you will, you know it), give me your answer. Thanks a lot.

PPS: Sometime within the next two-three days, I'm gonna make a new post. My last one was kinda dumb and I aim to fix it. Nothing important, but what the hell.

I'm very happy you enjoyed, you've always delivered good feedback and gave me something amusing to read with your comments. So you're welcome for the read.
Now, as for Haley being out on the dock while the sun is starting to rise, I was aware. Alluded to that with Haley's dry remark of "I hope they hurry". However, it could become less "out there" after a bit of a dip into War of the Damned.

Actually, forget the first post script, read your response. And I only suggested anime because:

A) No matter how hard one may try, supernatural phenomenon is EXACTLY that. You can't make it real. With that mindset, I believed it should be embraced. And

B) Having anime art style will be beneficial to the fight scenes, as they would become much more stylized and have more impact I believe.

But that's just my opinion. And what you see matters more cuz you made the series. :)

Signing out for now,

DarkX.

You can embrace something not being real, without having to fall back on an anime style. It just isn't me, I've never really liked the style very much. I like realistic style for my work because it suits me, suits that despite the strange tapestry of the story I try to tell, I like to make the characters and world real despite the very strange happenings going on.
As to the fights, I don't think they'd have more impact. In fact I think they'd have less of an impact with an anime style. I always tried to have short and brutal fights. I've never liked that many fights in most anime shows. It was too... unreal. Delayed blood spurts, lots of jumping about with motion lines... I could go on. I see something much more akin to say... "Kingdom of Heaven". Loved the fight scenes in that, never that long, no slow motion time, just *clash, clash, splash*. That's what I want, especially for the upcoming War of the Damned.

I think it was a hell of a ride. A fitting end to this story now you have to work on the prequel.

Indeed I do, and I'm starting it now. It should be up soon.

kool lalalalalalalala

Thank you

First thing I noticed was the F word =c
Nice ending, where's the story archive?

a wonderful end to an amazing story.

i smiled when you mentioned the frying pan, brings those memories of Dead Rising back to me.

you truly are an amazing author.

Why thank you.

As to the frying pan, I'm glad it brought back amusing memories, but I was honestly just trying to think of something fairly common that didn't need power that could be heated up to cauterize a wound. Frying pan was the second thing that came to mind (first was a torch).

And again, thank you.

wow simply epic. You are a amazing writer ever think about making and publishing a book?

Thought about it, but my work is a bit short for that. I write simply to entertain and I can do that for free of charge. I'll get my money elsewhere.

Also, thank you.

And... did you read the whole thing or just this chapter?

why did you have to end it?!!! WHY????!!!!!!!!

Because I didn't want to drag it out. This felt like a natural ending to me, so I let it end when it wanted.

great ending to a great story. i havent read all of it yet but im reading as much as i can and will finish soon. have you thought of making another story

I am starting work on a prequel to this one actually. Less focus on zombies, and much more focus on vampires, with a broader scope for plot. I hope it turns out well as I'm trying some new things with it.

i suppose a frying pan would work, if you could get it hot enough.

i really need to get on top of things and keep writing again.

I'm not entirely sure if it would work myself. I've not had an experience with a frying pan. I think it might be able to work... just not as effectively as open flames.

hey there friend.

Guten Tag

it should work perfectly

just not sure how you could heat it up that much.

yeah... we just found a plot hole in my own story. Damnit.

who says they couldent have left in a fire for like a long time

*shrugs* sounds like a bit of a cop-out really. Still, the story isn't perfect. Looking back at it, I see quite a few issues.

I'm just saying you should make an accessible link on every chapter if it isn't too much work.

When do you find the time to write?

Yes the girl knows how i feel and YES the other guy knows how i feel about the girl. so what ELSE can i do?

Well if she knows how you feel and she still isn't commiting to any relationship, I'd say you might want to consider moving on, or figuring out a suave way of wooing her. Ranting and raging doesn't work, and if she caught wind of it, she would simply assume that you're jealous. You're not even in a relationship and your jealous, that doesn't look good for you. Not trying to be mean, just being blunt.

My post are clear as clear can be. and i've calmed down now.

Well that's good, though I'd rather you bring this to conversation to PMs to keep this area clear for those who want to talk about my writing, or their own writing. Besides this being your personal life, I don't know how much you want others looking into it.

Well, you probably don't remember me but, a new chapter's up. (look back to previous posts for details)

I'll check it out.

Thanks for the advice! By next chapter, I can promise you that your questions will be answered.

Looking forward to it.

i found a rather interesting Zombie related song

<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OARmqz48Mh0">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OARmqz 48Mh0</a>

i find it just awesome.

thank you for sharing.