Images of Comics
Reminds me of some of my favorite artists in the comic book industry, and you do really well in this style. The shading in particular is very well done. The face is also great, and seeing how hard a face is to do, excellent job.
As for negatives, I do notice that one breast seems to be lower than the other. Had she been leaning or such it would have seemed a bit more natural, but her shoulders are squared. Indeed, the right should be lower than the left, as there is no noticeable bra strap on the right breast (right and left by viewing the drawing, not the character's position).
All in all, well done, great style.