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Blood of the Damned part 19

Posted by sinfulwolf - February 17th, 2010


One more chapter after this one. The battle finally commences right here, right now.
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Blood of the Damned
Part 19

Lunging forward, Haley's blade cleaved through a zombie's skull, spilling gore across what should have been a clean room, though in the near darkness it was hardly seen. The glow stick was dropped to the ground, casting its glow across the room as Haley's sword took the head from a second approaching ghoul while bullets zipped past her, striking the undead.

John stepped through the glass, and Haley slashed at him, steel slicing through the flesh of his arm, spilling his blood. A fist connected with her chest. Haley felt her feet lifted from the ground as she sailed across the room, her back colliding with the wall. The bitter taste of her own blood filled her mouth, staining her fangs, rolling over her lips.

Jay swore as he let loose a burst, the bullets tearing through John's head, but he did not falter, only stepping forward with his broken skull, bone and flesh knitting itself in a mottled rotten covering. He held no expression as he moved towards the very frightened humans, hands at his sides.

Haley reached out for her sword, pain flaring through the cracked ribs in her chest. She winced and grasped the sword anyway, feeling the marrow slide back within the bones, feeling the torn flesh within sew itself together, the agony slowly fading to where she could stand.

"Haley hurry," Jay yelled out as he shifted his fire from between the various zombies pouring into the room and John, who seemed to ignore the bullets tearing through his flesh.

Once again on her feet Haley leapt forward, cutting a zombie's head off before it reached Lila, then kicking out to her side. A neck snapped beneath the heel of her boot and another corpse flopped to the floor. As Jay and Lila backed away from the ravenous undead, Haley became a flurry of movement.

Dodging outreaching hands and John's fists, she slashed and kicked, spraying blood around her in crimson arcs.

"I'm out," Jay called in warning his hand searching for a magazine that wasn't there, and John turned his mutilated face towards the soldier.

Jay took a deep breath and dropped his M4, pulling his combat knife from its sheath on his hip. Holding it firm before his face he stared the large zombie down.

"Bring it on mother fucker," Jay demanded.

"Jay no," Lila called out, shooting a zombie in the face as it grabbed her shoulder.

Haley tried desperately to fight her way over to the alpha zombie who stormed over to who could possibly be the last living soldier on the entire island. Jay didn't move an inch, and as the first fist swung towards his face he ducked and slashed upwards.

Blood poured out of the gash along John's forearm, but he didn't react as all, his wound already healing as the other fist came swinging downwards. Jay leapt to the side, and winced as pain lanced up his leg, causing him to stumble. He could feel something warm and wet spreading beneath the bandage around his calf, seeping out from underneath.

John had no expression as his foot crashed down on Jay's leg, drawing a guttural scream of white hot pain from the depth of his soul. Bone snapped under the impact, shards piercing out of the skin. Jay tried to crawl away, but John grasped his broken leg where he had shattered it.

Jay screamed again, and Lila emptied her magazine into John's body, to no effect. She soon found herself backing into the corner, trying to keep herself alive as zombies came after her.

John lifted his victim by his leg from the ground, the skin straining from the weight, until it tore, and Jay's leg separated from itself and he fell to the ground, blood gushing from the stump below his knee.

"Weakness. I can end your pain," John said as he picked Jay up once more, this time, fingers encircling around his throat.

Jay jammed his knife into the abomination's eye, only to feel the fingers start to close, cutting off his breathing. He struggled in the creature's grasp trying to free himself, his knife stabbing into the arm desperately.

Haley came in from the side, her blade slicing upwards and severing John's arm at the elbow. Jay collapsed to the floor, taking deep gulps of breath after tossing the arm still clutching his throat away.

John glanced at his stump once, and Haley took full advantage as the creature tried to recalculate his attack. Her sword was a flurry, slicing long deep cuts across his torso. John's remaining hand snapped out faster than Haley thought possible and grasped her own arm, and quickly snapped it backwards.

She held back a scream as pain flashed into her mind, and stabbed her sword through John's bicep, severing tendons and flaying muscle from bone. Unable to control his hand while his body tried to repair itself, Haley kicked out, buckling one of his knees.

As he fell to a kneel, the vampire plunged her blade deep into John's chest, cleaving through his heart. His eyes went wide and he let out a chocked gasp.

"So you tried to become a vampire... I know how to kill my own kind, devil," Haley snarled, baring her fangs in John's face, and she smirked inwardly as she saw the devastation that final word had on John. She could see it in his remaining eye, whilst the other suddenly stopped repairing itself.

With that she twisted her blade, destroyed the creature's heart, and the semblance of consciousness within those eyes faded. Haley quickly pulled her sword out and swung around, her blade connecting and biting through John's neck and severing the spine, before passing through more flesh. As the head fell free, hitting the floor with the solid clunk, the zombies suddenly paused and started to twitch as if having seizures.

Haley smirked as she moved towards them.

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Lila helped the very pale Jay walk out from the forest. They didn't know where Haley was, but they had avoided the trail of corpses that led deeper into the dark green of the forest. There were no zombies around them, just the open fields of farmland, and the road that either led towards the cottages or the city.

Turning their backs on the smouldering urban centre, the pair made their way towards what they hoped would be their salvation.

Next Chapter

Blood of the Damned part 19


Comments

brutal

I did try.

how i love the beauty and dynamics of this story.

I'm really glad your enjoying it.

your story is freaky deaky dude.

I tried. Also... I'm not a dude.

Awesome entry. I loved the way you illustrated everything, with such power and strength. An epic battle I'd loved to have seen.

So, this is close to the end, right? The last threat has vanished, and the text is pointing it out. Over all, I'm happy to have been a part of this. Hopefully, your next project will be even better.

Everyone was telling me how they were waiting for this fight, so I really had to make it something that readers could envision in their minds. I do hope I succeeded.

Yes, this is indeed close to the end. There is one more closing chapter in this one, and then we start up the next story, which I've been looking forward to writing for awhile now.

If there's any possible way to even tell you how good this is in a single word, it's a word I don't know. This is just beyond description, beyond belief and beyond such boundaries that I've never seen the likes of before. And I mean that in the way best way possible. To simply regard this as "epic," does not even give an illusion of doing this amazing installment the justice it so rightly deserves. Just so you know, in full understanding of it's true connotations, "Trip," is an adjective I reserve for things that are so good as to redefine "raising the bar." Years from now, I'll come back to this site, this url and say "Ho-ly shit, what a trip," just because it is.

Just because IT IS.

Be honored. This is hands down the most unforgettable series I have ever read yet. Bar none. I want to plan a trip to Canada and meet you in person. It's not often someone would get the chance to talk with a visionary such as yourself.

And if all that didn't make any sense or sounds nonsensical, just understand you have a 100% true blue fan in me.

And that sexy picture is just the cherries on top of this Tower of Babel high chocolate cake with whipped cream...

DarkX.

Well then. I've succeeded in my primary objective, which was to entertain. That you have enjoyed this so thoroughly I can be at ease the the climax was up to snuff. Hopefully I can put down a decent "after the action" ending.

So, I am indeed honoured that you enjoy this so very much.

Forgot to mention, my brain is melting now.
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*ugh*

*collapses*

*Brain activity= 0%*
*Brain melt complete*

Hunh... brain puddle... *pokes with toe*

Silly brain can't think of a proper response... I'll be back as soon as I think of something...

Don't you hate when that happens? I'll wait.

brutal isn't enough to describe the awesome.

its just....i don't know.

metal

metal, cool. Wait till the prequel, there are some epic scenes planned for that one.

Ya wanted an update on my page?

YOU GOT ONE!

Warning: it contains a serious attitude problem that's directed at no one in particular...

I see...

kool

Glad you enjoyed.

Wuz up

uh... the story.

You never replied, so I thought you left for a bit =.=

To be honest it was kickass but I thought it was kinda a short lived one sided battle. As for jay, I would be pissed I lost my leg and you can't kill him off he might be the last man on earth. I think you should make a sequel to this and make a online book as well as sell it, because you truly are a gifted writer and you're stories convey exactly what you want them to. I look forward to the last chapter and a possible sequel if you're up for it. I think doing a follow up would be nice at least like a chapter to tell what happened after the end.

I didn't make the fight that drawn out as most fights in real life don't last very long. I try to convey a sense of realism amidst the fantasy and weirdness of my stories.
There will be one more chapter to close off the story, so its just not fading into the night. As for a sequel... well I'm not sure. I don't have anything in mind to continue the story, but we'll see what happens after the prequel.

Well disreguard my comments about a sequel I see what you are doing. But also I wanted to add that all you need is a artist to draw the illistrations and you got yourself a top notch book :3.

A great artist would be awesome, instead of having to use pictures I found on the internet, because they don't always convey the imagery I want. I get as close as I can however.
I'm actually quite excited about writing the prequel.

my friend lent me Dante's Inferno

AND ITS FREAKIN AWESOME!

It is pretty damn good. I'm pretty sure I'm fighting Lucifer right now.

I didn't receive any notifications after that either, so meh.

though judging from the first level, i can tell its a fairly short game

still it be awesome.

Yeah... fairly short. Still, it's been fun.

Alright, kthx.

Why so complicated?

It just occurred to me... talk has circulated around about this story getting it's very own art and, even more so, animated into a series. But any artist curteous enough to request your permission to do art/ animate this will ask what exactly you want. As in style and appearance. But that's the question: what exactly do you see? I know that, to some degree, you're not really all that fickle, but I know that making this required some visualization on your part. How exactly did you imagine all this? I always kinda thought of gothic drawings with a touch of anime and realistic air. What do you think?

Less anime actually. Though I do enjoy some of it, I've always seen what I present as more of a western "style". Gothic could work, especially with the vampire aspect of everything, but realism is mostly what I imagine in my mind. I may or may not some day put up rough (and I mean rough, I'm not a good artist) sketches of some things.
I also envision different things for the different stories in this "of the damned" universe. For Blood I envisioned something much more realistic. Very obviously modern. For War, more gothic, more fantasy to reflect the much more fantasy themed plots and characters.